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    Praetor got a reaction from InvidiaRed in AFF Holiday Party   
    Dang it, empty handed again.  I had a year to work something out!  You’d think I’d prepare a little better by now.  I’ll probably whip something up last minute and give it a proof reading skim right before uploading like I usually do.
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    Praetor got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Holiday Party   
    Dang it, empty handed again.  I had a year to work something out!  You’d think I’d prepare a little better by now.  I’ll probably whip something up last minute and give it a proof reading skim right before uploading like I usually do.
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    Praetor got a reaction from InBrightestDay in AFF Halloween Party 2019!   
    Again?  We just did this like a year ago.
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    Praetor got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Halloween Party 2019!   
    Again?  We just did this like a year ago.
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    Praetor got a reaction from InvidiaRed in Confused   
    I go out of my way to reword such sentences to escape it.  The House of Ross, The place with the Ross family lives, The building full of Rosses, etc.
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    Praetor got a reaction from JayDee in Confused   
    I go out of my way to reword such sentences to escape it.  The House of Ross, The place with the Ross family lives, The building full of Rosses, etc.
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    Praetor got a reaction from BronxWench in Confused   
    I go out of my way to reword such sentences to escape it.  The House of Ross, The place with the Ross family lives, The building full of Rosses, etc.
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    Praetor got a reaction from Runsinshadows in Confused   
    I go out of my way to reword such sentences to escape it.  The House of Ross, The place with the Ross family lives, The building full of Rosses, etc.
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    Praetor got a reaction from Snake_King in Snake_King's Story Discussion Thread   
    I happen to think youth is wasted on the young and thus, dig inter-generational relationships.  I also happen to like ship teasing Spidey and Carol even with the age thing.  Mostly for the meta value of how they really want Captain Marvel to be their flagship but Spider-Man continues to outperform her.  I personally didn’t like that scene because it felt arrogant to me for Carol to be making demands of Spider-Man but I get why it was there.  More to the point, one of my unannounced projects was a Spider-Man harem fic and that sequence did the work for me.  Young Peter holding the reality bending gauntlet and facing with the amassed femininity of the entire MCU.  The prologue writes itself.
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    Praetor got a reaction from InvidiaRed in How soon is too soon?   
    I believe whole heartedly that true love takes time to foster and develop.  Which is why I write smutfics and not YA.  I don’t got all year to write and you don’t got all day to read, so the sooner the better.  However long it takes to establish setting, character, and motivation.  How long that will take is highly variable but once they’re established, it’s best not to tary long.
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    Praetor got a reaction from Snake_King in Praetor's Discussion Thread   
    Maybe it didn't come up at all because there were far more pressing matters at hand.  Elsa was kind of going through a lot.  I don't get this 'Gay unless proven straight' Tumblr mentality.  Like the rampant speculation that Poe is gay for Finn.  Especially when gayness seems to only be confirmable with some sort of consummation.  I imagine Elsa's love interest will be the subject of the next Frozen movie.
         I don't really like filler, it feels like just filler.  Scooping up Anna will be the focus of the next chapter and maybe introducing one or both to anal.  Realistically, it's part of the same arch and more like pt 2 of this act and I probably could have combined them into a super chapter but that'd be long and extend the development time.  Don't know what I'll do chapter after next.  Merida is next on the list and that's a good springboard point but I'll see what else comes up.
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    Praetor got a reaction from BronxWench in Holiday Party 2018 Review Replies   
    PlagueClover writes "My first impression of this was that it read a bit like a recruitment ad, though a well-written one. I'm not throwing shade. It's not a bad thing. It suits this character and reminds me of a lot of people I know, though not soldiers, farmers and oil workers in Saskatchewan have pretty much the same crotchety attitude and unwavering pride in their controversial livelihoods. So it was believable. 
    So it starts off with that serious political rant, and then it kinda devolves into this campy, flirty porno. It was a fun shift in mood, and I'm grateful for it. Nice little addition to the party, thank you. Have a great New Year."
         Thank you for taking the time to guide this fledgling author.  I started writing the fic after hearing Soldier's Silent Night on the radio but quickly realized I didn't know how to handle the weighty topic and material.  I wanted to keep it short because I couldn't guarantee it'd be good.  The rant was written as a list of talking points to frame a conversation, but I suck at dialogue.  So it was either make a conversation on the matter the focus and ditch the lemon, or change the subject like a teen caught in a lie.  I went for the latter since the challenge is supposed to be fun and festive.
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    Praetor got a reaction from CloverReef in Holiday Party 2018 Review Replies   
    PlagueClover writes "My first impression of this was that it read a bit like a recruitment ad, though a well-written one. I'm not throwing shade. It's not a bad thing. It suits this character and reminds me of a lot of people I know, though not soldiers, farmers and oil workers in Saskatchewan have pretty much the same crotchety attitude and unwavering pride in their controversial livelihoods. So it was believable. 
    So it starts off with that serious political rant, and then it kinda devolves into this campy, flirty porno. It was a fun shift in mood, and I'm grateful for it. Nice little addition to the party, thank you. Have a great New Year."
         Thank you for taking the time to guide this fledgling author.  I started writing the fic after hearing Soldier's Silent Night on the radio but quickly realized I didn't know how to handle the weighty topic and material.  I wanted to keep it short because I couldn't guarantee it'd be good.  The rant was written as a list of talking points to frame a conversation, but I suck at dialogue.  So it was either make a conversation on the matter the focus and ditch the lemon, or change the subject like a teen caught in a lie.  I went for the latter since the challenge is supposed to be fun and festive.
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    Praetor got a reaction from Desiderius Price in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Tonight, Praetor joins the hunt…  That intro made more sense for the Halloween special.  Anyways, I am ready to elevate my status from one of the nameless lurkers to worst of the contributing bunch.  Behold!  The product of a Monster fueled writing session late in the night, inspired by a Christmas song I heard on the radio, research done hastily in the process on reddit, while also watching anime on Hulu.  Questionable and weighty issues are brought up, and then ignored because this is ultimately a senseless smut fic of dubious quality with a Holiday filter.  It was unasked for, it is unearned, and now, it is ready (as it’ll ever be) for consumption.
     
    Title: A Most Peculiar Burglar
    Summary: Santa, re-imagined as a busty descendant, visits the home of a soldier on Christmas Day.
    Tags: MF, AFFO, Challenge Fic, HJ, Oral, One Shot
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    Praetor got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Tonight, Praetor joins the hunt…  That intro made more sense for the Halloween special.  Anyways, I am ready to elevate my status from one of the nameless lurkers to worst of the contributing bunch.  Behold!  The product of a Monster fueled writing session late in the night, inspired by a Christmas song I heard on the radio, research done hastily in the process on reddit, while also watching anime on Hulu.  Questionable and weighty issues are brought up, and then ignored because this is ultimately a senseless smut fic of dubious quality with a Holiday filter.  It was unasked for, it is unearned, and now, it is ready (as it’ll ever be) for consumption.
     
    Title: A Most Peculiar Burglar
    Summary: Santa, re-imagined as a busty descendant, visits the home of a soldier on Christmas Day.
    Tags: MF, AFFO, Challenge Fic, HJ, Oral, One Shot
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    Praetor got a reaction from CloverReef in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Tonight, Praetor joins the hunt…  That intro made more sense for the Halloween special.  Anyways, I am ready to elevate my status from one of the nameless lurkers to worst of the contributing bunch.  Behold!  The product of a Monster fueled writing session late in the night, inspired by a Christmas song I heard on the radio, research done hastily in the process on reddit, while also watching anime on Hulu.  Questionable and weighty issues are brought up, and then ignored because this is ultimately a senseless smut fic of dubious quality with a Holiday filter.  It was unasked for, it is unearned, and now, it is ready (as it’ll ever be) for consumption.
     
    Title: A Most Peculiar Burglar
    Summary: Santa, re-imagined as a busty descendant, visits the home of a soldier on Christmas Day.
    Tags: MF, AFFO, Challenge Fic, HJ, Oral, One Shot
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    Praetor got a reaction from thebooblover in Praetor's Discussion Thread   
    Thank you all, I am touched (and kind of alarmed) that you took time out of this most precious holiday to share with me and the community.  I sent my Christmas story up, please swing by and say high to AFF moderators and co, they’re truly lovely people.  Have a Merry Christmas.
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    Praetor got a reaction from Snake_King in Praetor's Discussion Thread   
    Thank you all, I am touched (and kind of alarmed) that you took time out of this most precious holiday to share with me and the community.  I sent my Christmas story up, please swing by and say high to AFF moderators and co, they’re truly lovely people.  Have a Merry Christmas.
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    Praetor got a reaction from JayDee in I'm haunted   
    How good is the business?  You've heard the adage 'No such thing as bad publicity'.
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    Praetor got a reaction from CloverReef in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    I’m down for a Christmas party, maybe even a Thanksgiving Party.  I wanted to do something for Halloween but started late and couldn’t finish a fic in time that didn’t clearly rip off Resident Evil, Bloodborne or Dark Souls.  I guess I’ll try again next year.
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    Praetor got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Halloween Party 2018!   
    I’m down for a Christmas party, maybe even a Thanksgiving Party.  I wanted to do something for Halloween but started late and couldn’t finish a fic in time that didn’t clearly rip off Resident Evil, Bloodborne or Dark Souls.  I guess I’ll try again next year.
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    Praetor got a reaction from JayDee in Different penames for different stories.   
    I was thinking about that.  I feel like I typecasted myself and the good name of Praetor is now well associated with hyper proportioned harem fics of varying quality, and possibly old men in togas.  It just feels weird writing anything else now and when I work on Overwatch one shots and bleaker projects like Mad Love, I almost feel like I am betraying my core constituents.  But it’d be too much work to invent a whole new personality and brand name for the internet, again.
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    Praetor got a reaction from BronxWench in A challenge. Faint of heart be warned   
    I named the file I store my works in on my pen drive ‘The Torture Vault’ in anticipation of exactly this effect.  Most of my early works were either lost or were complete non starts until I began uploading.  I guess that’s a perk of starting comparatively late as well, my first fic doesn’t read any different from my more recent fics.  Which is actually something that bothers me, I feel like there should be some discernible evolution there.  
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    Praetor got a reaction from CloverReef in A challenge. Faint of heart be warned   
    I named the file I store my works in on my pen drive ‘The Torture Vault’ in anticipation of exactly this effect.  Most of my early works were either lost or were complete non starts until I began uploading.  I guess that’s a perk of starting comparatively late as well, my first fic doesn’t read any different from my more recent fics.  Which is actually something that bothers me, I feel like there should be some discernible evolution there.  
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    Praetor got a reaction from BronxWench in Different penames for different stories.   
    I was thinking about that.  I feel like I typecasted myself and the good name of Praetor is now well associated with hyper proportioned harem fics of varying quality, and possibly old men in togas.  It just feels weird writing anything else now and when I work on Overwatch one shots and bleaker projects like Mad Love, I almost feel like I am betraying my core constituents.  But it’d be too much work to invent a whole new personality and brand name for the internet, again.
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