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There will be times where your story will need more than one chapter to tell what happens. When that happens, plan the path that your story will take and then write that path. If it doesn't gel with one chapter than use more with breaks where they make sense.
You are the one who knows where your story will go; you are the only one who can take it there. Ultimately, you are the one who must be satisfied with your work. WE have the easy job of simply enjoying your presentation.

I werk Cheep two

but the potty is the only place I get peace and quiet when I'm home!

If you are working use the free time to rest and plot, write only if it moves you and no not while you go potty.

I have the same problem too with my tablet, when I'm not near my computer or laptop

Just finished chapter 26. Glad to see none of the family was hurt too bad. It looks like you are tying everything together nicely, at the same time opening up some new questions. Like what is Suzi going to do. Waiting patiently for what happens next. Until then have fun.

Same goes for me about Rick's background and also what Suzy might do. I have a feeling no matter how much see love her mother, I don't think she can leave the safety Rick and Max has given her.

my kinda girl...
oh, I am so gonna pay for that...many many times...

EVIL JUST EVIL. make us wait an extra day, now you want to tease us.

Why does toilet paper need a commercial
Is there anyone not buying toilet paper?
Ouch!

9 Most Dangerous Words Used By A Woman
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1) Fine
This is the word women use to end an argument when they are right, and you need to shut up.
2) Five Minutes
If she is getting dressed, this means a half an hour. “Five minutes” is only five minutes if you have just been given five more minutes to watch the game before helping around the house.
3) Nothing
This is the calm before the storm. This means something, and you should be on your toes. Arguments that begin with “nothing” usually end in “fine.”
4) Go Ahead.
This is a dare, not permission. Don’t Do It!
5) Loud Sigh
This is actually not a word, but is a non-verbal statement often misunderstood by men. A loud sigh means she thinks you are an idiot and wonders why she is wasting her time standing there and arguing with you about nothing. (Refer back to #3 for the meaning of “Nothing.”)

6) That’s OK.
This is one of the most dangerous statements a women can make to a man. “That’s OK” means she wants to think long and hard before deciding how and when you will pay for your mistake.
7) Thanks
A woman is thanking you. Do not question or faint, just say, “You’re welcome.” (I want to add in a clause here: This is true, unless she says “Thanks a lot.” Now, that is PURE sarcasm, and she is not thanking you at all. DO NOT say, “You’re welcome” in this scenario because that will bring on a “Whatever.”)
8 ) Whatever
This is a woman’s way of saying “F– YOU!”

9) Don’t worry about it. I got it.
Another dangerous statement, this means there is something that a woman has told a man to do several times, but is now doing it herself. This will later result in a man asking, “What’s wrong?” For the woman’s response, refer to #3.

Assholes on Parade by Timbuk 3
It’s an asshole celebration and they’re all out on the street
See them on the sidewalk, oh hear those shufflin’ feet
As twenty thousand assholes do an asshole promenade
Step aside good people it’s the assholes on parade
We got the assholes for freedom, the assholes for fun
The assholes for Jesus and the assholes for guns
The assholes for justice, the assholes for crime
And the assholes for assholes, the assholes of all time
Assholes makin money, they’re makin all the rules
Takin all our jobs and they’re fillin up our schools
Assholes in the water, assholes in the sky
Sign that says help wanted only assholes need apply
Oh teacher won’t you tell me,
Have I really made the grade
Am I the head of the class
Or just another asshole on parade
Assholes give the orders and assholes row the boat
Assholes get elected ‘cause assholes get to vote
I once heard it said that old asshole never die
They just lay in bed and multiply
Assholes in the morning, assholes every night
Assholes to the left and assholes to the right
As twenty thousand assholes do an asshole promenade
Step aside good people, it’s the assholes on parade

Magus, enjoy the time with your family. I am sure that they are enjoying the time you spend with them. Just remember that the time will be ending soon and then you can recoop and then get back to your other enjoyments (writing and blowing things up). Keep the faith.

You found it and got it to work ! I'm happy as a clam. Again THANKS !

B

My significant other, She had been poking her nose into my life for so long I decided to marry her over twenty years ago, still poking her nose into my life but at least I get to poke mine in her...ah I mean...no that's right!
<----- the one on the bottom is Angie!

It's no biggie, I guess I just get listed in the roll of the departed, a long and illustrious list indeed. LOL My girls are livid though, so at least there's a humorous facet to this! Nut as for getting banned, I really don't care, I wrote for years and Angie was the only one who ever read any of it

Well, I guess I'll only be looking here for your stories from now on!
At least I can still find them!
Wow, what a crock!

Evidently:
“Hey big fella, you ready for a little fun?” Nick turned and saw TK walk into the kitchen. She was as beautiful a woman as Nick had ever seen, her caramel colored skin was flawless except for a scar from a knife wound that began mid-thigh on the inside of her left leg and ran down and left to end just above her left knee. She also had a circular scar on her right shoulder the size of a dime. The shoulder scar was from a bullet that had found its mark, a wound that had nearly killed her. The knife wound was from a smuggler in the mountains near Nepal. He evidently wanted to soften her up a bit before he and his mates raped the twelve-year-old girl to death. That was as far as the thugs had gotten, because right about then Nick had arrived and sent them to whatever after-life they believed in.
That constitutes a graphic representation of underage sex, so I've been banned. LOL, my wife and two daughters have been on the forum lighting them up. They are truly pissed for some reason, I'm like eh, whatever.
So, I doubt I'll ever post a story over there again, I don't care much about the rule but it's obvious now that one of the MODS has it in for me, so I'll just stay here.

You want an Alice, you have to build her, as for TK, I have one and I'm not letting anyone else get their grubby little paws on her.
just been informed that I WILL let a few choice individuals get their grubby little paws on her
just been informed that their paws are not grubby
<sigh> there are way too many women in this house!

I wanna TK/Alice.... where can I find her at? All the ones I know are super sarcastic.... oooh, send me Nadi, that would be a really good one to just hold, and care for, I guess I'm too much of a Max, they'd probably wind up killing me, but, what a way to go. BTW, not broken, just bent is best, it gives us caring ones a good project.

I found part of the issue, at least this time around. Sorry about that.

Yeah I know what you mean. I hate when women get hurt whether its physical or emotional. I started to read a series on the old site called Broken Birds. It is about women who have been abused and I must have stopped reading it 20to 25 times until I finally finished it.
It turned out to be a very good series. So I guess I will try to continue reading this series doing what I do by skipping spots I really hate. To Magus please whatever you do, don`t get Marge or the girls together with Rick. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE. It is bad enough that May has left.