Hey guys/girls,
I'm from Germany and I would like to post a part of my German-Stories on English.
There for I need someone who would read my Story, who speaks English and tell me, if the Story is readable.
I don't need Tips for the Stroyline, but critic is welcomed.
the Story is about Naruto who is feral and creates his own pack. This is a Harem Story with a storyline and lemons, no Yaoi.
I really hope someone will help me, otherwise I must use google translator. :help:
Greetings Ferestor