magusfang

be careful she doesnt put you down, break your legs would be an effective way to keep you home
LOL

i've decided that i don't want to risk a second of the time i have left with my family. if there's anything i regret about my life its all the time i spent away from them, everything i missed, never again so dont worry about me.

yep, been for 16 years so I think we'll keep her.

she's a wild one, but we wouldn't have her any other way
get out of my head....but no close though...actually no...
god, i'm such an ass

oh there will be sex and twists, hell i'm not even sure where the story will go

he was in a rage still, not really thinking straight

or he comes to his senses and realizes what he's done and flips out again, self destructs along with all the other naniyes and everyone dies, Hey, I could wrap this up in one more chapter

he was in a rage still, not really thinking straight

Max and legion designed him a body composed entirely of nanites
of legions design so smaller and can be absorbed through the skin
The boat, and I forgot to put this in, was put together by the two men the major left behindoh and yes Alice is with the major heading for a small island off the coast and we still don't know how bad the taser damaged her...da da da

Well obviously DA let the cat out of the bag...so yes while he seems to be a mechanical Marty Sue now, his flaws will be revealed, and his weaknesses

he was in a rage still, not really thinking straight

ok, Shadows chapter 9 is up, sorry, no sex in this one but its hard to do in the middle of a battle

Oh my god, she found the thread...is nothing sacred any more?
get her an account they said...it'll be fun they said...sigh
so just need to spell check it and its done...gonna take a quick shower first though...should be up sometime soon

:rolls eyes: at DA
Ok, the reason they shot Mika was they were terrified, remember the house floodlights are on so they are partially blinded and being cut down, they would shoot at anything that moved
As for Alice getting tazed, well military tazers pack a punch
so what happened next would be telling, though some of you are pretty close...

he he he...its awesome
so writing the second half of the battle scene...blood gore and the odd explosion!

Mmmmm, the family is a bit angry, especially the machines...I don't think there will be any living prisoners...
And it doesn't look good for either side :shakes head sadly:

over half done and the bodies are piling up

:rolls eyes: at DA
Ok, the reason they shot Mika was they were terrified, remember the house floodlights are on so they are partially blinded and being cut down, they would shoot at anything that moved
As for Alice getting tazed, well military tazers pack a punch
so what happened next would be telling, though some of you are pretty close...

He just walks in, shoots everyone and builds a new robot family

A cliff hanger with an actual cliff

A cliff hanger with an actual cliff

oh no, they both have already expressed that they want Max to be the father and just as soon as i can figure out a plausible scenario max will make it happen

that would be scary
but sadly no

oh no, they both have already expressed that they want Max to be the father and just as soon as i can figure out a plausible scenario max will make it happen

A cliff hanger with an actual cliff