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[What's something that a lover could do during sex that might give someone pause?]

On 2/5/2024 at 9:42 PM, Deadman said:

So, I’ve been working on a story involving two characters falling in love, although one of the characters appears to be gaslighting the main character. There’s a series of events where the main character and their love interest agree on something, but then the love interest breaks the promise to the main character. It’s two female characters.

I’m working on the first love scene between them and I’m trying to figure out how to show something is wrong during the love scene. Something the love interest can do, not necessarily to make them stop in the middle or not go through with it. However, something that will make the main character think about in hindsight.

Maybe getting one character getting the other’s name slightly wrong?  Something that’s eerily similar to another’s name?

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52 minutes ago, InvidiaRed said:

43595! Surprise!!! The gordian knot is naught but string.

Going in loops?  I refuse, so it must be.

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