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From BronxWench on November 08, 2017
Chapter 21:
What does Tormund have planned, indeed... It does sound rather ominous, although I have to admit, I thoroughly enjoyed Clegane and Tormund's conversation. It makes sense, though. Of course Tormund would want to claim Brienne, as much as Clegane does.
But oh, so bittersweet, when they realize it will not matter if Brienne falls pregnant. My throat was tight when I read this bit: “When winter came, I got the two of you to keep me warm until the end.” She laughed strangely. “In some ways, I'm very lucky.” So very true, and so painfully sad at the same time.
Thank you!
Oh, yes… sad for them, but they won’t die. None of them will. And I’m really kind of ashamed of myself, but I’m having this massive internal fight with my evil muse at the moment. I find myself in an unusual predicament. Against all the odds, against Gods, and the repeating of history and such things… I want to save them from their fate somehow. I’ve got a whole load of my brain working on it. If there’s a way, while staying true to original vision of the plot, I’m going to do it. I’ve been writing all this nice stuff for them, and I’ve accidentally fallen completely in love with these characters. So much so that I want to let them have a happy ending, even if they have to endure a little bit of heartache on the way.
We shall see. I am so weak.
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From BronxWench on November 08, 2017
Chapter 20:
This line: "In short, she welcomed him with her whole body, and it was a thing of beauty, just like Brienne herself." It just sums up this chapter for me perfectly. This entire chapter was a thing of beauty, the perfect consummation of a brilliant slow burn, and the beginning of a new reality for all three of them.
I am in awe of how deftly you handled this. Truly, one of the best first times I've ever read.
Yay! Thank you, Bronx!
This means a lot. I’ve written slash for so long, I’d no idea how I was going to do with het fiction, but I’ve really been enjoying it with these three. And I’ve loved particularly writing this slow leading in, letting Brienne’s character get to it properly. She can’t be rushed, word count wise. Although, ironically, in terms of time, this really is fast.
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From BronxWench on November 08, 2017
Chapter 19:
I'm just going to say I adore Brienne. Completely. No one else could ever make Clegane and Tormund jump to heel quite so firmly, and no one else could ever see them for who they are as well as she does. They really are hers, aren;t they?
I'd grumble about the cliffhanger, but I'm behind, so I have lots to enjoy yet. So, off to read some more!
Thank you again
Honestly, I’m amazed there aren’t more stories out there with the three of them in. I think they all match each other perfectly. But as far as I’ve been able to see, I have the only one *sighs*
I’m not sure if they’ll ever manage to completely overwhelm her, but they’re going to have a good go. Pretty soon, I think. Well, as far as I am at present, anyway. *g*
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Reviews for We're All Going to Die
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From BronxWench on November 08, 2017
Chapter 18:
Honestly, I am beginning to quite like Clegane. He was rather neatly handled by the wildling and the dwarf, wasn't he? But I do think he's right. He was meant to be the one all along, even if it means ending up battered and possibly maimed. I don't think Brienne will go as far as death, although Tyrion certainly courted it.
Such a lovely story!
Thank you, Bronx!
And thank you for beta reading this chapter too.
Yep, and so Clegane is back at the beginning, only with a slightly angrier Brienne to contend with, lol. Got to admit, I do kind of like seeing him in a bad mood though. It suits him. Luckily, seems like Tormund is always going to be around to wind him up
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Reviews for We're All Going to Die
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From ANON - Karen on November 06, 2017
Wonderful, thank you for creating this.
Karen
Thank you very much Karen!
I’m glad you're having fun with it, and you made my day, just before bedtime.
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Author: pippychick
Title: We're All Going to Die – Missing Scenes
Summary: A bit more fun between Clegane, Brienne and Tormund, featuring requests and things.
Feedback: Yes, please.
Fandom: Game of Thrones (TV Series)
Pairing: The Hound/Brienne/Tormund and combinations thereof.
Warnings: 3Plus AFFO Anal BDSM Bi Bond Dom DP Ds Exhib Fingering HJ MF MM Oral Other Violence WIP
Solo story or chaptered story: Series of one shots connected to main fic.
URL: http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099407
So, while I was away, I kind of wrote this. The first reader requested fic relating to the main story. They wanted to see the wildling marriage chapter from Tormund’s pov.
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23 minutes ago, JayDee said:
Galadriel / Shadowfax.
I’ll… I’ll leave now.
lol! If you write that one, I promise to review it. I know your stories, you’re more than capable. Maybe she can mindspeak to the horse or something… that would be fun, especially if Shadowfax was all: “You want to what?! Are you insane?” and then threatens to tell Gandalf or something, and she has to convince him not to... *giggles*
Ok…
*waits to see what happens*
Honestly, it would be hilarious. Please do it!
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Well, I’ve just come back from holiday, and seen this post. Now I’m all happy, when I was a bit post holiday blue (ish). But! I’ve come back with lots of inspiration, so who knows… maybe I’ll be prodding Bronx soon to carry on our tale at the very least. Writing with her is like a wonderful dream…. Thank you, Joyeuse!
You are so awesome - BronxWench and JayDee
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I’m pretty much into elf slash, and I’ve written my favourites. So those would be (in no particular order):
Sauron/Maglor
Elrond/The Mirkwood Three (and combinations thereof), which is to say Oropher, Thranduil and Legolas
Elrond/Young!Thranduil
Acutally, Elrond/pretty much anyone, including Celebrian
Thranduil/Legolas (with Tafkab)
Erestor/Twins (with Tafkab)
Glorfindel/Erestor (I lost a lot of chapters when I got rid of a duplicate story in the archives, and I never really got over that)
Glorfindel/Gildor (with BronxWench)
Legolas/Gimli
I’m sure there are more. I was starting to enjoy writing little bits of Celeborn/Thranduil and Galion/Legolas when I kind of lost my muse.
I was also getting to know Curufin/Celegorm, and I’d just begun advancing the S/M into Melkor/Sauron territory.
Maybe it will come back. I hope so. I mean, The Teacher is kind of like my life’s work of the past 10+ years, and I’d like to finish it someday.
- Avaloyuru, BronxWench and JayDee
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From Avaloyuru on October 25, 2017
Too cute! Enjoyed it, a good read! Made me smile!
Thank you Avaloyuru!
I was just playing around a bit. Mashed a couple of co-authored stories together, and the characters in them.
It’s so long since I wrote for lotr.. I have to get back there eventually. At the moment, I write what the muse tells me to. But I miss Glorfindel and Gildor. And Elrond.. I miss him. And Thranduil. And Legolas. *sighs* I don’t miss Sauron.
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From discord_the_lunatic on October 25, 2017
Very good so far.^_^
Thank you so much discord_the_lunatic!
I’m glad you’re enjoying it <3
There will be a delay in posting now until I return from my holidays. But I’ll come back with inspiration, I’m sure… I’m, like, going to stay in a castle! For one of the nights, anyway.
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7 hours ago, CloverReef said:
And I like Pippy’s option for a totally different reason, because she has such a fascinating way with words that I could never pull off. Somehow she manages to do it without coming off as ‘wordy’.
lol.. thank you
Given how things are going lately, though… I should probably be taking a much more critical look at everything I do, because something is very wrong. If I’d have been doing the S&M stuff right from the beginning, clearly he’d have made that elf write and post fanfiction… *nods*
Trouble is, I’m really not sure I can change all that much about my work without drastically altering the rhythm of the prose and the pacing. My ear won’t like that at all
Back on topic, if I was going to edit my suggestion, SGS, I’d probably go with:
“...I couldn’t take another round with you,” she said in a quiet purr of satisfaction. It made him feel…. etc...
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So… I’m still not sure what I’ve done to the readers here at AFF. I’ve got to assume that 100+ hits between chapters (in a couple of days) isn’t just googlebot. *shrugs* At this point, I officially give up.
The story seems to be getting a good response on AO3, using my incognito identity. Even the later chapters. I don’t really get the difference. But it’s good. It means I’ll write it properly, rather than rush it to the end to get it out of me and then let it gather dust on my hard drive without ever letting it see the light of day. Because it was in danger of that for a while there. I was just so incredibly sad about it. I haven’t even had the whisper of an urge to write anything at all in so long, and then this was there, and the characters are so clear, and it feels good to write it. It sparkles, just like it should. And then… nothing.
I’m not sure why feedback is so important. I mean, am I really that insecure? If I enjoy writing it, and I enjoy it, isn’t that enough? It should be, and yet somehow it isn’t. Without an audience, it’s like playing an overture to an empty concert hall. Especially because parts of this plot are going to continue a theme I’ve touched on before.
And I’m going to stop right there, because being around here lately is just so bad for my confidence, and I can’t help it. *sighs*
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“...I couldnt take another round with you” she purred.
“...I couldn’t take another round with you,” she said, and her voice was a quiet purr of sound, full of satisfaction. It made him feel… blah blah blah…
Obviously, I am from the school of: why use one word when ten will do? But I do feel that putting it that way leads nicely into the next thought in the paragraph, which for me is how the male pov character would respond to what she said, and how she said it.
- BronxWench and CloverReef
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27 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:
With regard to porn stories, they always begin as fantasies, and I write them up because I feel that they become hotter if they have an existence outside of my own head.
That’s strange. For me, I’d say it’s the opposite. I’d say I write pornographic material, but it begins with character, and ends up as a fantasy of what they might get up to if they were going to go completely and utterly wild. Usually, the where, how and why that happens along with the necessary plot points for character motivation is what makes the story. And I make concessions to character that go through me sometimes. For instance, I personally detest the word “pussy” but because my pov character would absolutely think in those terms, I have to use it and let it infect my narrative voice. At least for a while. Well, for as long as I’m writing him… well, them. They’re both like it.
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Ok, so the sex scene is going to run over three chapters. Pfftt… there are three characters. I think that’s fair enough. I’m not sure what my record is for writing smut over multiple chapters, but I’m pretty sure I haven’t broken it here. I’m sure Elrond has managed this many at one time or another, definitely with Thranduil and co. I mean there are three of them versus Elrond. He must have gone to three chapters before. Remember how demanding Thranduil gets from time to time? If it runs into a fourth chapter… well then just maybe I’ll look back and check on it.
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Ok… another evil cliffhanger, I know, but I already wrote most of the continuation. I had to split it up, because nothing will make me post 6K + chapters.
Anyway, now that’s done, I have a bit of housework to do, then hopefully, all being well, I can get around to some reading. I see there are some halloween stories flying around.
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I think I probably tend to overuse these kinds of descriptors a lot. I also use a lot of ‘he said’ ‘she said’ and I go into describing exactly how things are said sometimes. I can’t help it. I hear things more easily than I see them. For me a scene might have a collection of vivid imagery, but an extremely consistent soundtrack. I don’t know if it’s something to do with being musical besides being a writer. Character voices are usually crystal clear to me, which is why I’m probably still dawdling around writing fanfic after all this time.
I don’t know… it’s really hard to judge yourself, no matter how many times you read over it.
But, as to the original question, it should feel natural. If the character is making a sound in your mind at that point in the story, write it out, and my advice for what it’s worth is don’t skimp. This isn’t just noise. Sound is one of the textures that makes up our lives. It’s just as important as any of the other senses, especially when it’s an intimate situation. If you can, don’t just leave it there. If character A whispers, how does that affect character B? Are they close enough to feel it, as well as hear it? Use sound. Use it to bring your readers in, so that they’re with the characters, with everything that’s happening. I don’t know how else to put it. I kind of wish I knew how to deconstruct it properly like an English teacher or something, but I don’t. If it’s happening in your mind, write it.
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You know, I’ve always looked to Sheffield’s industrial past and thought there must be a good supernatural horror story or two lurking there. Sheffield’s heart is a dark, dead space filled with crumbling red brick buildings blackened with grime, and smashed factory windows. And it’ll remain like that forever, no matter how much “regeneration” they engage in. It’s our history. All those souls lost to industry. And through the middle of it all, making it possible, the river Don. Without the river, there’d have been no industrialisation of Sheffield. If that river was conscious, and it could speak, it would hate all of us. Without a doubt.
I mean, I won’t write that, but that’s the angle I’ll probably take. I love your idea! It’s the resentment of the natural world, personified in a single instance between a river and a man.
If effluent, toxic chemicals and waste from manufacturing processes can hurt and kill a river, I’m sure there’s an equivalent for a man. The body horror I’m evisaging is kind of taking you literally. I mean, sticks, stones and riverbed mud in odd places would be incredibly painful, perhaps even fatal. And especially if they just kept appearing. How long would this man endure something like that before he went along to the doctor? Would he? How would he hide it? When exactly would he get past the point of entitlement (once he realised what was happening to him) and decide that it was time to appease whatever it was he’d angered? Would it have a chance in hell of working? And that’s just first thoughts. Lots of evil potential! *rubs hands together*
- JayDee, InvidiaRed and BronxWench
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2 hours ago, JayDee said:
A factory owner starts illegally polluting the river. The river spirit takes revenge by polluting him.
Haha… seems to me there’d be a whole lot of scope for genuine body horror in this one. Similar theme, completely different approach to the other one I wrote. If I ever get done with GoT, and no one else has taken it, I might keep this in mind.
- JayDee, InvidiaRed and BronxWench
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I don’t know the fandom, but...
If you’re after keeping the situation fairly platonic and familial, then that’s easy enough. You can do that by way of what the sisters notice about each other while they’re snuggled together. As the author, you provide the cues for the reader. If, however, you want the situation to be erotic for the reader, just not for the characters, that’s a slightly more tricky proposition.
In that case, I’d suggest pulling the narrative back from the characters a little at times, so that you can be quite descriptive about what’s going on physically, without needing to involve how the two sisters feel about it, as such, and just dipping in here and there to peek at them enjoying these moments as sisters.
If, on yet another hand (is that three so far?) you want to have a kind of charged erotic situation with some unresolved sexual tension going on, well then you’re probably best off concentrating on one of the characters, and going deep into them. Letting them have all their dirty thoughts, while trying on the surface not to let it become apparent in what they do. Particularly focus if they feel any guilt or shame. Those emotions are always good, especially where incest is concerned, as characters will generally try to rationalise it for themselves.
If, on a fourth hand (and at this point I’m probably using someone else’s hands), the sisters are already in some kind of established incestuous thing and they’re both cool with it, but for some reason they’re not going to start eating each other or something… well, then I really don’t belong on this thread… *runs away*
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And thank you again!
Lol… well, I did do a little bit of research into what he might do for this. Seems Brienne played right into his hands. I had a request for this particular chapter from Tormund’s pov, and you’ll find that in the MIssing Scenes as the first post there.
As for that other thing you want… haha… chapter twenty-eight.
Yes, he does. But that had to be a possibility, didn’t it? I mean… what with Gendry telling them all about Melisandre tying him to the bed naked, and Clegane piping up to say: “Sounds all right so far.” He was doomed to it in fanfic somewhere. Why not mine? 