Fusedtwilight

I am looking for someone with a good eye for spelling errors and pronunciation. Someone who is willing to offer suggestions and constructive criticism. One story is for an original fandom and an X-Men fandom. Moon Lust is a supernatural with graphic violence and sexual content, the other is has some swearing but mostly action adventure. If you would like to be my beta I would like to know if you have had past experience as an editor and I would prefer a beta who is good at catching mistakes and continuity errors in the story. Thanks.

Wow got a lot of reviews to answer lol. I will answer some of them. luna-isis: I love cliffhangers what can I say. stillsmialing: I almost felt bad for stopping there but I realized if I didn't it would be way to graphic and much more painful. Lisa: You will find a lot of crazies in the black tribe. Katniss Everdeen: I have never had a broken bone or lost an eye but I hear they are quit painful. Mickal: We will be seeing some of the gods next chapter but sadly there will be no smiting. Kirjava01: Indeed. Addiena_saffir: I didn't want to spoil what was going to happen, but next time I will be more clear on when someone is going to get messed up that bad. bambi4real: I did consider just stopping at the beating and leg breaking but Eleanor as you read is highly unstable and thus she would go to extreme lengths to punish Jeremy. Werewolves are capable of regenerating lost or damaged organs so Jeremy will be fully healed when he becomes a werewolf. We will see Aiden go to extreme lengths to find Jeremy and as for Lars h won't be making an appearance any time soon, nor would he hold a grudge against anyone who kills Jeremy. He would be disappointed he didn't get to kill him but on the whole he would be happy to know he is dead. Anon: Eleanor made sure he got treated after she plucked them out. She doesn't want him dead until the new moon. Snowleopard: Don't worry, next chapter will be a 'No torturing Jeremy' chapter. Thanks for the reviews guys. I love you all for the questions and thoughts. Keep them coming.

My first Post on the forum! This is for people who read my story Moon Lust. This way I can respond to reviews and answer any questions people have about the story.