saiyansecret

Correction on 'Feedback': Feedback is no longer desired.

Your mission, if you decide to accept it, is to become one of the rare writers in the fandom who ships Vegeta/Goten and write me a story I can recommend on my blog. (Precision: in my universe, GT never existed and never will, so about end/post-DBZ. I see Goten as anywhere between 16-20 and he never cut off his beautiful hair. Just consider that they are my OTP, the rest is up to you as long as it looks good in my rec collection.) I doubt if anyone will, but WTH. [This post will self-destruct in 5 seconds]

Author: saiyansecret Title: "Bonds and Trust" Summary: At the beginning of their relationship, Vegeta underestimates Goten and gets more than he bargained for. Feedback: seems to be a moot point, but is welcome. Fandom: DBZ Pairing: Seme!Goten/Vegeta Warnings: Dub-con, BDSM-D/s Chapters: 5 URL: http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023933 Thx for reading.

Author: saiyansecret Title: "Total Satisfaction" Summary: Gohan had already seen Goten & Vegeta in action, but it wasn't enough & he succumbs to an offer he can't refuse - & gets more than he bargained for. Feedback: is always welcome if it's constructive. Mostly I count on Tumblr friends for that, as readers here seem either afraid to give their opinion or just don't bother. Probably the latter case. Fandom: DBZ Pairing: Vegeta/Goten/Gohan Warnings: m/m, anal, BDSM, toys, oral, 3+ Chapters: 4 short chapters URL: http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023932 Thanks to all who read. I write for fun, & hope that you at least enjoy the free smut!

I didn't want to make a multiple choice poll with limited answers. So... Please reply in a comment as a 2-part answer: -(Regardless of pairing preferences) What kinds of fics would you like to see more of? & -(Besides bad writing) What type of fics or content puts you off? RSVP!

Summary: When the two of them find themselves alone by the pool, much more than the sun heats up. (No warnings apply, just yaoi!) Link: http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org.story.php?no=600023927

My link didn't show up in my post: http://www.fuckyeahvegetaxgoten.tumblr.com (If the link *again* doesn't show up, message me or maybe try this): http(colon)//www(dot)fuckyeahvegetaxgoten(dot)tumblr(dot)com Sheesh! :-P

A collection of fanfics, fanart & more dedicated to my forever OTP Vegeta x Goten!

My main blog hosts an ongoing fanfic saga I'm writing, "A Tail of Two Saiyans" (First draft). Pairings (in order of appearance; some work out, some don't): Goku/Vegeta, Trunks/Goten, Vegeta/Goten (OTP), Goku/Trunks, Gohan/Trunks Summary: What happens when a rare full moon planetary conjuncture brings our heros new powers and some strange changes? What is the new menace that lurks during what they believed to be a time of peace? In any case, their love lives will never be the same. Rating: NC-17/MA (very explicit sex) Genre: Yaoi lemon-romance, suspense, adventure + other stories & sexy fanart. Link: http://www.saiyansecret.tumblr.com *** My 2nd blog: 'Fuck yeah! Vegeta x Goten' Fanfics, fanart & more dedicated to my forever OTP!

Hello there. I just posted my second story: Author: saiyansecret Title: "Poolside Encounter" Summary: When Vegeta and Goten find themselves alone by the pool, more than the sun is heating up (One version of Goten's first time). Feedback: I know that reviews are very rare on this site and why, but I'm truly seeking opinions on this and any story I post here. Honestly I'm not happy with this story and would be very grateful for any feedback and advice. Fandom: DBZ Pairing: Vegeta/Goten Warnings: yaoi m/m, anal, just normal m/m sex Chapters: 3 short chapters URL: http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023927 Thank you to all who read and hopefully tell me what you think of it. I greatly value the opinions and advice of my readers.

Forenote: At this stage, my OC is only a newborn, so I'm imagining him later at about 10 years old - old enough to be a skilled warrior, but not enough to age the other characters too much! lol Fandom: DBZ (in a slash/yaoi saga) Char. name: Son Tenjiita (last name first) Char. race: 3/4 Saiyan, 1/4 human Height: taller than Vegeta but not as tall as Goten Weight: average for a lean, muscular build (I'm bad with #s!) Brief background: Originally cloned by a supervillain (also an OC) using Vegeta's & Goten's DNA to be quickly grown up in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber (traficked), trained & used against them, he is rescued & grows up normally with his real family. Position/job: Saiyan Z-fighter & ninja like his godparents. Strengths & skills: All typical of a Saiyan (ki blasts, super strength, speed & fighting skills, etc.,) + ninjutsu. He has extraordinary psychic & empathic skills. A child prodigy, as predicted by a soothsayer on Vegeta-sei to the king, he is a legendary Saiyan with exceptional powers. " typical of DBZ?: Yes & no. Though his innate skills are typical of Saiyans, his powers pass them up & he also becomes a ninja trained by his godfather (another OC, the genetics engineer forced by the supervillain to clone him) who after the adventure becomes his godfather. Weaknesses/bad habits: At times he has a temper & is rebellious, though is secretly quite sensitive. He has a complex of feeling like an undesired child, which seems normal. Honestly he isn't developped well enough to know anything more specific. Distinctive features: His longer hair & very piercing eyes are an exact combination of Vegeta & Goten, his "parents". He has an unusual, mysterious aura about him, even to those close to him. Distinctive features unique in DBZ?: No, he looks like a typical Saiyan though is very recognizable, except for his ki which shows his extraordinary powers, & his mysterious prestance. Yes, because he is very mysterious & filled with contradictions. Connections to canon characters: He is the cloned son of Vegeta & Goten, but is claimed & treated by all as would be any family member. Thus, Goku & ChiChi's grandson, Trunks' little brother, Gohan's nephew, etc. How he gets along with his family & allies: Very well, as long as they don't cross him or injure his pride. At times he has insecure thoughts that he won't fit in because he was cloned. What other characters think of him: They find him friendly & polite, have positive opinions of him, he is charismatic though he doesn't know it, cold & stoic on the surface, unless they know him well & become very close to him (which is not many). They find him very mysterious & that he puts a lot of pressure on himself. At first they find it awkward as he is cloned with 2 male parents, though they get used to the idea. Notes: This would be difficult for someone to understand who isn't familiar with DBZ, so hopefully my description helps. My OC is only recently developped, so I know his character needs a lot of work. I already feel quite attached to him, & he seems very real to me. As in my story's timeline he is a newborn & not yet rescued, he can only be developped theoretically at this point. I tend to write as I go along according to my inspiration. Hopefully not too much of a Marty Stu! XP

Bonjour, Je suis américaine et je vis en France. Je me demandais s'il y aurait des lecteurs des histoires de DBZ yaoi en français. Comme ce n'est pas ma langue natale ça risque de craindre, mais serait peut-être possible s'il y a une demande. AFF est très embêttant en ce qu'il est rare qu'on laisse de revues. Y-a-t-il d'autres fans de DBZ yaoi francophones?

"Pardon", by SJKillJoy This is one of my all-time favorites. Raditz/Vegeta (flashback to Vegeta-sei) & Goku/Vegeta (present). The DBZ yaoi artist Rutobuka on Tumblr was once inspired to illustrate this fic. Very hot, a must-read! http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023820

OK great. I'll post it up!

OK, I found the thread I was looking for. Just earlier tonight I was very depressed, seeing the large number of hits my 5 day-old story got compared to its lack of reviews, & to be honest I just wanted to delete my whole AFF account & leave. I'm still doubting my desire to post anything else, which I would have to type directly here for nothing. I get more support, guidance & encouragement on my personal fanfic blog where not nearly that many people read my stuff, who are not at all obliged to encourage me but still do. I also see fics that have been here for ages (excellent ones) boasting thousands of hits and (maybe) 1 or 2 reviews. WTH? Yes, I can definitely see the bitterness & frustration of those who leave the (asked-for) reviews & then get chewed out &/or reported for their honest concrit & no longer wish to deal with that. Authors who behave like that instead of honestly considering what the reviewer said & using that advice to improve their writing are immature, unprofessional, & ruin it for those of us who would be thrilled with some honest reviews, pointing out both the positive & negative points of our writing. If the author doesn't want honest opinions, why do they publish their work to begin with instead of just keeping it to themselves? A writer who writes to have their ego stroked is doing so for a very poor reason & misses the point entirely. I don't agree with what the person who directed me here said about the cause being my older, less popular fandom, because those who read it in the first place are part of that fandom. So, cutting to the chase, I can clearly see both POVs. Isn't there some system that could be put into place where the author must indicate & take responsability for whether or not they want honest feedback so that both authors and readers can share the stories, advice & opinions that are an important part of the art of any type of writing? Just being 18 y.o. or + does not mean 'adult' in my eyes. The 'Adult' part of 'Adult FanFiction' should not only signify graphic sex & violence, but the maturity that must accompany it. To quote one of the heros of my own fandom, humility means sacrificing one's pride to keep one's dignity. If something is worth doing, is it not worth doing well? Unfortunately, on our archived stories we have no way of letting readers see the difference. No one is telepathic, & as the poll shows, I have a hard time believing that writers don't care that they don't get reviews. A writer who can't take criticism has no place in a public writing site, what else can be said? I must say that I'm finding my experience here very disappointing, and am beginning to doubt that I'll stick around.

If not, sorry, this can be deleted, if so next time I'll point you toward one of my all-time, hottest favorites!

"Dark Side" (Vegeta/Goten) Why not. This is the first story I've published here, so here's the link: http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023924 Let me know what you think of it! *My OTP Forever*

I once read this story on Tumblr, unfortunately the blog that hosted it is no longer there. I'd never considered this pairing in the past as I prefer Vegeta/Goten, but after reading this story you got me intrigued about the pairing. It was very well done & I actually loved it!

Feedback sought. I'm not only speaking for myself here, but also for all writers in general, using my case as 1 example of many. I published my first story here on Oct. 27, it is now Nov. 1. The last time I looked, my story was read 236 times, & I guess I should consider myself lucky to have 1 review. Hell, I get a lot more feedback than that just on my blog, where not nearly that many people have read my stuff. I've seen stories that have been here for ages (good ones) with ~3000 reads yet only between 1-4 reviews. OK we write smut, but it's still a lot of work that we aren't getting paid money to write, we do so by enjoyment & our 'payment' is when people take a few short minutes of their time to give us some feedback on our work, which is very encouraging & sometimes gives us ideas to improve our writing. So, the message I get is that our stories are good enough to fap off to, but not good enough to review. WHY are there so few reviews on this site? On other popular FF sites, these same stories would get ~50-100 reviews. PLEASE do not tell me that I should not expect to get them, because writing is a lot of work, & besides that 1 kind person, that gives me the impression to have typed it here for nothing. Some may find my attitude bad in some way (fill in the blank), but I'm sorry, if that doesn't quickly change I won't publish anything else here; in the mood I'm in now I'm even considering deleting that 1 story & leaving this site. There is another FF site that accepts adult material where I can try publishing to. Excuse me, but where is the concept 'ADULT' in Adult FanFiction? Surely I'm not the only one who thinks I have no reason to be here.

Nobody here likes DBZ? I couldn't exist without DBZ yaoi! lol XD

I'm not exactly familiar with all the terms, but since my fandom is DBZ you can see my type! In general I go for the more muscular guys who have lots of pretty hair & innocent faces. I'm a sucker for the protector/protegé type of relationship, parallel to seme/uke. Though as someone mentioned, I do like to change the seme/uke roles from time to time, even when one of them is typically one or the other. It gives them variety. Where shouta is concerned, I guess it depends on who it is, what happens & the situation. I like to think I'm pretty open-minded.

Author: saiyansecret Title: "Dark Side" Summary: (Post-DBZ) Vegeta agrees to act out Goten's fantasy, and later shows him a hidden side of himself. Feedback: This is my first time posting a story here, so feedback, constructive criticism or general opinions on the story and writing would be very much appreciated! Fandom: DBZ Pairing: Seme!Vegeta/Goten Warnings: Yaoi/Slash m/m, anal, BDSM, S&M/discipline, h/c Chapters: 4 URL: http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023924 Hello all! I know this isn't a popular pairing, but it's my OTP (how and why is a long story). I would greatly appreciate any constructive feedback on my story, and I highly thank everyone who reads and hopefully reviews. I hope you enjoy it!