DirtyHaven

Furry clam sounds more funny than sexy, if I used it, I'd use it in humorous context. Rather than vocabulary, what kinda puts me off in an erotic story is a first person narrator who's telling the stuff in present tense. For some reason, I just prefer past tense and a third person view.

To tell the truth, I have no idea where I get the inspiration for some of the stuff I write/draw. The idea for my Yoruichi x Soifon fan fic just came to me all of a sudden. Out of nowhere, I got the idea to write an erotic story about those two and I started developing the idea in my head. The next day, I got to work. Although it's rare a sudden idea like this actually becomes something concrete. I'm sometimes inspired by the music I listen, but that usually applies when I'm drawing. With writing, not so much. I guess music can give me some image in my head that I then try to copy on paper. Either it end up being something like what I saw in my mind... or then not.

With the story I just published yesterday, I didn't wait long as I finished it the day before yesterday. That was because it's a one-shot, though. When I've written longer stories, I've usually waited till I got the second chapter underway and knew where I was going with it.

That'll come in handy, thanks! This topic is in place, when I was writing, I felt like I was repeating myself with the terms. I'd be interested in learning more terms for vagina and the labia, something figurative and erotic romance novel like (for example, at one point I used "sanctum" for vagina).

I went for a "tasteful" approach in my first fanfic, using words like "breast" and "labia" because I thought they'd fit the story. I also tried using vocabulary like "sanctum" for vagina. However, I like the dirty slang and feel I'm better at writing that than using the figurative terms, mainly out of fear of sounding corny. I've got an idea for my next story already and I was thinking of making it as dirty as I can, so I could live up to my pen name

Hi everyone, I just joined after looking for a place to publish my fanfic. I originally wanted to submit it to DA but then I found out they won't allow "pornographic" literature (and although I tried to to keep it tasteful, it ended up very naughty). Luckily, I found this place! So, if a yuri story about Yoruichi and Soifon happens to interest you, do take a look. You'll find it under the name of this topic, Miss Yoruichi Forever in My Heart. It was the first time I ever wrote a fanfic, although I've done other writing before, including erotic works. Constructive criticism would be most welcome! story link