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  1. Talented_Mrs_Lupin - He is rather naughty, isn't he? And I do so love him that way! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for your continued support! I hope you enjoy the new chapter. Mark's Pet - Yes. I am a tease. I admit it. I hope the anticipation made this chapter even better. I'm finally giving into your wishes! And I hope this chapter explains a bit about Ron and his attitude. I've never really been fond of him and I was writing as if he was quite suspicious of Hermione and Voldemort. Thank you so much for you continued support! I hope this chapter lives up to your expectations! Nerys - Hi! Thank you for the review! I'm glad you are still enjoying the story and I appreciate the "when you're ready" comment. I've been so busy that it has been difficult to find time to write. I look forward to your updates as well I hope you enjoy this sexier chapter! Sorcha - Thank you so much! I really want to do the characters justice, so I'm glad you like the writing and characterization. And I'm glad you agree about the knowledge bit. I've always thought it could be seductive and definitely a good way to seduce Hermione. It was difficult writing the giving in/resistance parts and it's really nice to hear that it's working well. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Amanda - Thank you! I hope you like the new chapter Thanks for reading and reviewing. Zombiereine - I have a Kindle and I really dislike typing on it, so I really appreciate you taking the time and effort to review! I'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying the story. I hope you enjoy the new chapter as well!
  2. I'm sorry for your troubles. I definitely think you deserve to complain a bit. I sent you an email a while back in response to one of your posts, not sure if you ever received it (though might be kind of useless since teaching overseas isn't an option). Regardless, I hope things turn up for you soon! Annnd this is Fleur K. That was probably obvious, but still.
  3. Mekom: Thank you! I'm glad that you like it. This is my first fanfiction, but I do write original works as well (though I don't publish those online). She will be able to occupy her mind soon enough and yes, it is never a good idea to be a part of Voldemort's plans I hope you enjoy the new chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
  4. Is this feature still unavailable to new users? I haven't seen anything posted about this recently, so I apologize if I missed something.
  5. Here is where I will be posting review replies for the following fic: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096134 Chapter 1: Nerys - "Very promising start. I look forward to see where you're going to take this. I like your portrayal of Hermione and Voldemort a lot so far." Thank you! I was kind of worried since I haven't written about them before. "I do think the usage of "my dear" by Voldemort at that point and in front of all his followers was a bit off (especially without there being a reaction to it by others, be that derisive laughter aimed at Hermione or uncomfortable shock of him addressing a Muggle-born like that), but that's just me nitpicking and don't worry too much about it. I've made similar errors in my stories (I still have a "baby" to delete somewhere in mine). They're not that big a deal and easy to fix if one wants to." - Thanks for the feedback. I really like the idea of his followers laughing at his use of the term, I might have to go back and add that into the story Also, I've read quite a few of your stories. I'm Fleur K, but decided to use a different name to post fanfiction, one that perhaps suited me more than "Fleur K." Honestly, I don't know how I even came up with that name. "I absolutely liked the rest of your chapter. It's a relief to see appropriate grammar and spelling. It's also a relief to see a Hermione who uses her brain and isn't an immediate mess when confronted with LV. I liked the pacing you took with this; their reactions to each other were not rushed and seemed logical given the circumstances." - I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. I know what you mean about the grammar and spelling. Luckily, I'm an English major....so I hope I don't make too many mistakes. Again, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. It means a lot to see a review from someone whose stories I like so much. I hope you continue reading.
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