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  1. I assume too much, too often. Sorry.

    1. BronxWench

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      Not to worry. You gave no offense as far as I'm concerned.

  2. It is easy, click your name and type what is on your mind.

  3. Taking some time to make sure that I am doing what is best for the story and not what is best for my desires.

  4. Trying this again, feel free to read, rate, and review, I AM THE BOX GHOST!!!

  5. I am okay with changing the age around, but it is more like he is forcefully developed to be older than his age implies. A couple of examples of this would include Superboy, (comic or Young Justice cartoon), or The Cuckoo triplets from X-men. Though I can see how this would be confusing and it would not be too hard to say that he aged normally in the tube for 16 years. His build is athletic, but he has grey skin, red eyes, and bone protrusions coming out of his joints, I wouldn't call him handsome or ugly. I'd would say he is more exotic and a bit scary based on his appearance alone. As for his sexual preferences, I would go with M/F to start with, but since this is WIP and I want to follow the narrative, it is possible that his sexual horizons might expand. I do not plan on him being a rapist, but it will be a challenge for him to find someone to look past his appearance and origins to give him a chance.
  6. The Story is set within DC comics, mostly in the superman universe starting out, and it is about Kid Doomsday. The general themes of the story will involve the juxtaposition of conflicting morals and desires. I want to put the priority on the narrative first, but this story is a coming of age story and a bubble boy story, so I fully expect there to be sex in the later chapters. Starting off I want to establish the character's origin and personality. He was supposed to be a combat beast capable of destroying Lex's enemies, but due to an incident during the incubation period, Kid Doomsday comes out with a gentle deposition. What I need is someone knowledgeable about the characters of the DCU to make sure that I have their dialogue and personalities right. I am also looking for honest and constructive feedback about the narrative, since this will be the first story I will be posting, I want to make a good first impression here. It has been advised to request links to your stories to see the credentials of potential betas.
  7. Where: DC comic-verse Name: Kid Doomsday (Yes I know about Doomsboy) Race: Synthetically created hybrid Age: 4 years old (aged to 16) Height: 6 feet tall (9 feet when transformed) Weight: 200 pounds normal (550 when transformed) Background: When Superboy fails to be apart of the legacy of Lex Luthor, he realizes that he should not have used the DNA of his hated enemy. He then comes to the conclusion that the being who beat Superman should be a more worthy successor of his new legacy. Unfortunately, during the clone's incubation period the approved subliminal implants were replaced with life lessons from PBS shows, (such as Mr. Rodgers Neighborhood), thus creating a conflicted boy who fights against his violent instincts, but desperately wants to please his “father.” Occupation: Lab Rat Abilities: Super Strength (about as much as Aquaman when in normal mode, but he nearly rivals Doomsday when transformed), Healing, Adaptability, Intelligence (above average human), High Speed Running and Reflexes, (All abilities accept for intelligence are enhanced when transformed.) Weaknesses: Conflicting morals and desires within himself makes it hard for him to hurt things, intelligence is lowered when he goes into Doom-mode. He has a hard time fighting women due to lack of exposure too outside world. He hates it when people look at him and call him a monster. Features: Tall for a 16 year old, with gray skin and long white hair. Besides that he looks human when he is not transformed into Doom-mode. When in Doom-mode, his height increases, he gains a large amount of muscle, and bone protrusions come out of his joints. Connections to cannon characters: Sees himself as Lex Luthor's son and as a rival to Superboy. He is a clone of Doomsday and Lex Luthor. How does he get along with those around him: He is a disappointment to Lex Luthor when he finds out about Kid Doomsday's gentle nature and puts KD through trials to try and fix the implanted corruption. What other characters think of him when they meet him: Basically he seems like another villain to those around him, but he is a rather gentle guy when left to his own devices. But he will fight when provoked/threatened or when his “father”, Lex Luthor, tells him to.
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