KoKoa_B

It’s been a while! I hope everyone has been staying safe and healthy. I actually started writing this story back in October for Inktober 2019: instead of drawing, I decided to use each word in a different chapter. It evolved into my NaNoWriMo project but then a lot of things have happened and now it’s a story I try to update as much as I can. 
 
Author: KoKoa B
Title: Don’t Jump
Summary: Leaving work, Tamara Henderson sees a man who she believes is about to jump to his death, only to find out that he’s filming a scene for a movie! When she bumps into the charismatic Thomas Lamb once more, she has an urge to fight her desire in becoming more than friends.
Feedback: Feedback is welcome but keep in mind that this is the 1st draft so I know that things are rocky.
Fandom: None/Original
Pairing: OC/OC, M/F
Warnings: Fingering, M/F, OC, Other (slight drug use), WIP
Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109576
Review Reply thread: 
 

I shall participate… hopefully… 

I shall participate… hopefully… 

I shall participate… hopefully… 

Okay, wow LOL! Just so you know, every time I get an email saying that I got a review, I have a mini panic attack! 
First, I want to tell you that I literally laughed out loud at the “Specific Anime Offering”. Yes, I’m guilty of this story being loosely based off of SAO so no it wasn’t just a weird coincidence. When I finally started to binge the anime, I knew I wanted to write something on the lines of it before finishing the series but I didn’t want to use the actual characters. Talking to the mods about it, I was reminded that this has been done before (Jumanji, etc.) so I made the decision to make this Original instead of a fanfic.
The characters, at the time of the “entrapment”, do keep all of their items at the time. So, Tweety still has his bow, and J still has her abilities and summon monsters. 
One of these days I’ll come back to this story… and my other ones… >.> so thank you so much for the review! 

Thanks, BW! I forgot all about Jumanji and Tron…. 

The idea of VR gamers stuck in the game is not unique to Sword Art Online. There’s been any number of instances of that being used, like the movies Jumanji and Tron, and more novels than I could name quickly. So I think it’s fine under Original Fantasy/Adventure.
Oh, and you’re never stupid. It’s a good question!

Congrats! Self published counts! I’m super happy for you and I hope you get to publish a shitload more in the future! <3 Rock on

I never thought I would ever use this thread for myself…
I finally did it. I’ve joined the ranks of the published. Grant it, it’s self published but thrilling all the same! 
It’s late but hey, people will read Christmas stories year round! My novella romance, My Funny Valentine, became live on Amazon today. You can get it in paperback or ebook form. 
The cover done by our own @ChrissyQuinn and editing and proofing by fellow AFF writers/vets: @CL Mustafic and @Tahn
(Gonna copy pasta from Tahn because her blurb of my book is WAY better than my own...): Terri is getting divorced from her adulterous husband and decides to treat herself by buying tickets to see her favorite celebrity who is speaking on Valentine's day. During an upsetting phone conversation, she hears a British voice ask if she's ok. It's a voice she knows. As her eyes meet those of her dream man, something sparks between the two, but when his wife shows up, all hope is lost. Or is it? His wife has a proposition for Terri, become Anthony's companion when he is filming in America. Does she dare accept this once in a lifetime opportunity, and will it prove to be too good to be true?
AUTHOR PAGE!!!

Congratulations!!!  That is completely awesome, and I’m hurrying off to buy my copy!

I never thought I would ever use this thread for myself…
I finally did it. I’ve joined the ranks of the published. Grant it, it’s self published but thrilling all the same! 
It’s late but hey, people will read Christmas stories year round! My novella romance, My Funny Valentine, became live on Amazon today. You can get it in paperback or ebook form. 
The cover done by our own @ChrissyQuinn and editing and proofing by fellow AFF writers/vets: @CL Mustafic and @Tahn
(Gonna copy pasta from Tahn because her blurb of my book is WAY better than my own...): Terri is getting divorced from her adulterous husband and decides to treat herself by buying tickets to see her favorite celebrity who is speaking on Valentine's day. During an upsetting phone conversation, she hears a British voice ask if she's ok. It's a voice she knows. As her eyes meet those of her dream man, something sparks between the two, but when his wife shows up, all hope is lost. Or is it? His wife has a proposition for Terri, become Anthony's companion when he is filming in America. Does she dare accept this once in a lifetime opportunity, and will it prove to be too good to be true?
AUTHOR PAGE!!!

I never thought I would ever use this thread for myself…
I finally did it. I’ve joined the ranks of the published. Grant it, it’s self published but thrilling all the same! 
It’s late but hey, people will read Christmas stories year round! My novella romance, My Funny Valentine, became live on Amazon today. You can get it in paperback or ebook form. 
The cover done by our own @ChrissyQuinn and editing and proofing by fellow AFF writers/vets: @CL Mustafic and @Tahn
(Gonna copy pasta from Tahn because her blurb of my book is WAY better than my own...): Terri is getting divorced from her adulterous husband and decides to treat herself by buying tickets to see her favorite celebrity who is speaking on Valentine's day. During an upsetting phone conversation, she hears a British voice ask if she's ok. It's a voice she knows. As her eyes meet those of her dream man, something sparks between the two, but when his wife shows up, all hope is lost. Or is it? His wife has a proposition for Terri, become Anthony's companion when he is filming in America. Does she dare accept this once in a lifetime opportunity, and will it prove to be too good to be true?
AUTHOR PAGE!!!

I never thought I would ever use this thread for myself…
I finally did it. I’ve joined the ranks of the published. Grant it, it’s self published but thrilling all the same! 
It’s late but hey, people will read Christmas stories year round! My novella romance, My Funny Valentine, became live on Amazon today. You can get it in paperback or ebook form. 
The cover done by our own @ChrissyQuinn and editing and proofing by fellow AFF writers/vets: @CL Mustafic and @Tahn
(Gonna copy pasta from Tahn because her blurb of my book is WAY better than my own...): Terri is getting divorced from her adulterous husband and decides to treat herself by buying tickets to see her favorite celebrity who is speaking on Valentine's day. During an upsetting phone conversation, she hears a British voice ask if she's ok. It's a voice she knows. As her eyes meet those of her dream man, something sparks between the two, but when his wife shows up, all hope is lost. Or is it? His wife has a proposition for Terri, become Anthony's companion when he is filming in America. Does she dare accept this once in a lifetime opportunity, and will it prove to be too good to be true?
AUTHOR PAGE!!!

Seeing that there’s no expiration date for entries:
 
Title: The Last House
Tags: NoSex 
Summary: A brother and sister take the children to one last house before calling it quits for Halloween.
Just something that came to me literally on Halloween night and I finally got a chance to write it down and submit. 

Thanks, Clover! Maybe that’s my problem: I was never subtle with my sex scenes until this story. And the reason why Jamila is the way she is will be explained later because my plunnies decided that this wasn’t enough at 10k… 
I’m so glad you found Tu’Van hot  because I thought that I could do a bit more with him… story and description-wise.

Alrighty. Still working on my story but I suppose I can do my format for it
 
Title: Liquid Lust
Tags: ….. M/F, Xenophilia, Mind Control(…?)
Summary: After being literally dragged into a closet by her best friend and husband at a Halloween party, a woman decides to take a sip of what they’re drinking…
 
Okay, I suck at summaries but it’s the best I can do for right now without giving away exactly what happens lol! The one thing that won’t happen is death, I promise!  

Alrighty. Still working on my story but I suppose I can do my format for it
 
Title: Liquid Lust
Tags: ….. M/F, Xenophilia, Mind Control(…?)
Summary: After being literally dragged into a closet by her best friend and husband at a Halloween party, a woman decides to take a sip of what they’re drinking…
 
Okay, I suck at summaries but it’s the best I can do for right now without giving away exactly what happens lol! The one thing that won’t happen is death, I promise!  

I’m in…? Yeah, I think it’s a go… 
Instead of wiping out everyone, I’ll be a little more light hearted this Trick O’ Treat season: a good ol’ fashioned Halloween party!  
Wait… that’s how it started out the last time… didn’t it…? >.>

I’m in…? Yeah, I think it’s a go… 
Instead of wiping out everyone, I’ll be a little more light hearted this Trick O’ Treat season: a good ol’ fashioned Halloween party!  
Wait… that’s how it started out the last time… didn’t it…? >.>

I’m in…? Yeah, I think it’s a go… 
Instead of wiping out everyone, I’ll be a little more light hearted this Trick O’ Treat season: a good ol’ fashioned Halloween party!  
Wait… that’s how it started out the last time… didn’t it…? >.>

3.3: Practice

Aaand another reason why I won't go to Australia; thanks for that! LOL

XD "50/50"

... I'm afraid to Google DropBears... LOLOL

I could answer #2 but it looks like you’re abandoning it. But the answer to #3 is no lol