AlexPyrane

So I'm looking for a beta for my original BDSM Erotica. It is M/F with some potential F/F somewhere down the line. The story is called the 7 Pleasures of Being a Whore and the first chapter is already live. And here's the link for those who are curious http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106600 I already have Lesson 2 written and Lesson 3 is currently in progress. I need someone to look over chapter 2 and tell me if there is any sentences or words that seem really awkward and need to be rewritten. I also need some help getting chapter 3 rolling again. There is a lot of bondage going on in this story, plenty of foreplay, the female in my story is a Masochist and the male is a Sadist so expect spanking, caning, and other pain/pleasure activities.

I've noticed that there are no Hocus Pocus stories on the site, which is depressing considering I'm really in the mood for a Dani/Thackery Binx fic. Dani needs to be older, in her teens, and somehow Thackery has to be able to touch her and he can't be a cat. It can be one chapter or multiple, doesn't matter to me, but there has to be a sex scene and it can't be non consensual.