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  1. I noticed that the manga section has been pretty dead lately. Not only are very few people writing stories but the stories don't have many hits, either. It's a bit frustrating since I started writing a new manga story in August last year. I try to update frequently but I somehow doubt it has regular readers since It has no reviews. What do you guys think? Anyone making attempts at writing some manga stories? Does anyone read or review them anymore?
  2. So busy lately with publishing novels that the fanfics suffered. Let's see if we can fix that...

  3. Author: MarieKrepps Title: The Other Hanyou, Nixi Summary: What if there was another hanyou in the Inuyasha series? What if fate had different plans for Sesshoumaru? Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism are very much appreciated. Fandom: Inuyasha Pairing: Sesshoumaru/OC Warnings: AFFO, Angst, M/F, OC, Oral, Preg, Violence URL: http://inu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096613 Hello everyone! I have gone back and edited every chapter of the Nixi story. I would love it if you would go check it out. I am now moving on to its sequel, The Truth About His Past. This one is incomplete and my hopes are that in re-reading and cleaning these stories up, inspiration will hit me so I will be able to complete The Truth, which is the last of this tragic and beautiful tale. Please feel free to leave me some feedback about the stories so far. Thanks for reading!
  4. New chapter up for my latest Inuyasha story! Yes, I know it's been forever since I posted but I really want to continue on with my favorite Inu characters and my OCs. I thought I was close to wrapping this up but now I'm getting some great ideas... Author: Marie Krepps Title: The Truth About His Past Summary: The sequel to my first Inu fanfic: The Other Hanyou, Nixi. Yoshiki is a hanyou trying to find his real parents. With the truth comes complications and things become further complicated when a lovely miko catches his eye. Will his family ever be whole again? Can he win the girl's heart? Feedback: Please! I would really like some feedback for this story! Fandom: Inuyasha Pairings: Sess/OC, Rin/Kohaku Warnings: M/F, OC, Oral, Violence Spoilers: If you haven't seen the entire series, including The Final Act, this has serious spoilers. URL: http://inu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096694 Thanks for reading and please feel free to let me know what you think of this or any of my other stories!
  5. Trying to get back into writing fanfics. Been working on other things lately like AMVs, fanart and other novels...

    1. Hairyhaggis

      Hairyhaggis

      I know the feeling. Trying to organise my time to fit around everything as well as have time to write providing my mind is in the right zone for the story can be a bit tricky.

  6. Writing is seriously slow during the holidays for obvious reasons. But I stil want to read other's work up here!

  7. Thank you so much for answering my question! I feel stupid but I really couldn't find an explanation on the site.
  8. I understand, I absolutely suck at describing clothing. But the best advice I can give is, do some research. I was trying to think of a cool weapon to give one of my characters and i spent hours researching. I actually had more fun researching weapons than writing that scene! I even found other weapons to use for future characters. Research an be boring but it's also your friend. I still suck at describing clothing but if it's something that is seriously vital to my story, I use the wonderful world of the web to help!
  9. Dear God, yes! I recently read a story that I really liked except the author's note at the beginning of each chapter explaining new characters introduced, when there would be flashbacks, when there would be a rape scene, etc. Then again right before that part! Annoying! FLASHBACK WARNING: RAPE SCENE Seriously? Couldn't you just put the damn flashback in italics or something? If I ever do that on accident, someone please send me a nasty email so I can smack myself.
  10. Techno Ninja, you are so right! I have experienced a girl's version of blue balls before and though it doesn't really hurt per se, (it's more of a deep ache) it sucks big time. I'll never tease a guy again!
  11. I have to agree with Morbid Fantasy. I use those words sometimes on purpose! If I'm writing something really dirty that's meant to be just that, then I find it funny to throw in vulgar, silly words like pussy and tits. My more serious sex scenes might use those words sometimes but i mostly use the senses to help set the mood. The taste of his lips on hers, the smell of his hair in her face, that kind of stuff is what makes the sex scene a more intimate one. It is really hard not be repetitive. There are a lot of words that I don't like to use but then I just feel like I'm using the same old stuff. I guess turn ons and turn offs just really depend on the reader. Everyone likes something different: dirty, silly, flowery, etc. I just write my own thing and hope that the ones who read it are the ones who like my words choices! (By the way, I hate penis and vagina. If you ever catch me using those it's because I'm seriously desperate for another word. Cyber slap me please!)
  12. This may well be the stupidest question you've ever gotten but here goes: When I post stuff and see my name and pic pop up, I also see the little points bar with a dollar amount by it. On my profile page is a donate points button. I've been searching for an explanation to this without success. How did I accumulate these points? Do I get these when people visit my posts? Does 'donating' them mean that you guys get money from this? I'm all for donating these points if it means that you guys can make a profit but I don't want to do anything without completely understanding what it is I'm doing! Can you explain this procedure to me? Thanks
  13. New chapter up for the dirty little story about three roommates! Author: Marie Krepps Title: Roommates Summary: Inuyasha walks in on something unexpected... Feedback: Yes please! Would you like more or should I stop before you throw things at me? Fandom: Inuyasha Pairings: M/M, M/F Warnings: Threesome, Anal, Toys, Fingering, Oral, Spanking URL: http://inu.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096711 Thanks to everyone who read the first chapter! I hope to get more readers and more reviews. Please let me know what you think!
  14. I must agree with Shadowknight. I'll never be a brain surgeon, but it doesn't mean I can't write a story from a surgeon's POV. I'll never be a man (unless I DO decide on that sex change operation...jk) but it doesn't mean I can't write a sex scene from a man's POV. Though personally, I tend to write sex scenes from chick view points because I like my male characters to be mysterious. It's more fun if the reader has no idea what their thinking because they'll never know what they might do or say next! I think I might challenge myself to write one from a male perspective now, just to see how it turns out.
  15. Suffering from a mindset I call "Writer's Boredom". I like my story, just tired of looking at it.

    1. Melrick

      Melrick

      That happens to me far too frequently.

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