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Avast! Time to answer reviews....late. Reviews for Above and Below - A Queensbride vignette Sky 2012-07-02 Ah, the sequel. Only two little chapters, leaving things completely open. Is everything alright Adelphus? Thanks for bringing more life into this story, though it seems that this is it. Hope you find something just as good to write that won't tug at your heart like Queensbride has. Good work. Nay, 'tis not the sequel. I'm working on the next chapt o' the sequel inbetween sickness and distraction. I'm going to break off the last few chapts of 'QB' and set up 'QB2: Revenge of the Sidj' (working title) as its own entry. Soon. Saige 2012-07-03 I must admit, the moment I saw that name, that blessed name within the 'latest' tab I was most pleased. It has been too long since I have had the pleasure of reading the exploits of my favourite queen and her handmaiden. Thank you for continuing I think Phi may have to stay a handmaiden for a bit in the sequel. I might have a secret wedding of sommik, but straight out marrying Phi might not be realistic. Also, soon. o.o trainmail11@gmail.com 2012-07-04 I love you for ever writing Queensbride. @_@ I love you for ever reviewing Queensbride. @_@ darklighter 2012-07-05 Having read portions of your book, I found this vingette (both parts) to be quite interesting, and the last QB one touching. Seeing Sidja, who always assumed control before, almost stepping on eggshells around Phi really made me think and wonder, for what reason I can't say as I can't quite describe it myself. As usual, your writing was excellent and insightful, and I should hope to see more of anything you have to show us Cheers, mate! I'm glad you liked both sides. I wasn't sure Above would be allowed, or would be unwieldy, but it's part of the tale, so I let it be. Roles shall be further tested and sex shall be further had in "QB2: Fifty Shades of White (Queen)" (other working title) But in the meantime, please enjoy this, from the Queen and Phi; Click the link!

Hey you guys! I finished it! A while back, actually. And I wrote some sequal. Also a while back. Anyway, 'QB' is out being apparised by publishing people, and as the wait is unbearable, I ask if perhaps you might read and review. Title: 'Queensbride' Author: Adelphus/Anie Summary: Little maid Phi was in love with the Queen/ And upon Her the girl did spy/ From up in the rafters most every night/ Until one night the queen came for Phi... Codes: Angst, BDSM, BP, D/s, F/F, Fingering, H/C, Oral, RapeFic, S&M, Tort, Toys Chapters so far: 37 (Complete) Plus three chapts after. ♥ ---->Hits [12058] -:- Reviews [118] -:- Average / Total Vote [+++++ / 178] <----♥ (might get in trouble for putting this, but I'm so thankful.:-) Rating: Adult+ Pairings: Original - Misc > -FemSlash - Female/Female Feedback: Desired greatly. URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600104096

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The Queen suspects I must have learned all this subconsciously, somehow. It's possible; I do know little bits of this and that, but Sidja is the archetype of my romantic fantasy (and heavily based on Tilda Swinton's version of the White Witch of Narnia). She came to be, and Her circumstance formed around Her to suit Her nature. I find it, well, insane that She may very well have existed in some form. Also, EXTREMELY validating! It makes QB incredibly plausible! I remember reading about Elizabeth I as I was editing and just freaking out all over my wife about it.;-) I'm trying to figure out where to let the story go from here. Sidj and Phi have been throwing ideas around. Personally I think Phi would rather the story end with 'happily ever after' but the Queen is more ambitious. I think She just wants more opportunities to showcase Her sexual creativity. Above all I want it to be plausible. I can't stand premises where I spend the whole time face-palming over stupidity.

I am so happy I'm remembering to check this. I wonder if I can subscribe to this thread somehow? *looks around* Oh for...it's right there! So to answer your question, I know surprisingly little about anything this story is about except the Queen and Phi themselves, so I was really surprised how similar Sidja is to Elizabeth I. I mean really surprised. She even liked horses! As for the nobles, it is a delicate dance. Some houses are easy for Her to control, others, not so much. I think She'd prefer to have them all dance for Her, but Her kingdom contains houses with warrior lineage and can't be handled the same as those further South. Priorities are different. North is about pride and strength, South is about reputation and wealth. It's a fairly new confederation, maybe a hundred years or so, and still shifting. The Queen wants to set up a Constitutional Monarchy by the end of Her reign to deal with it. It's going slowly. :-)

Oh...right. Damn, what did I write again? Anyway, Queensbride isn't dead. I'm just focusing attention on my other book. I'll probably be back to writing it this fall, if not sooner. Please, please do write a fan fiction! I'm probably too late, aren't I? If you do, please let me know?? Cheers!

Check out AFF's cafepress shop. I won their contest last year with a painting of Sidja and Phi, so they're on cups and such. All money goes to keeping AFF running. http://www.cafepress...fiction/7519257 Cheers! Also, here's a link to my other book in PDF form for navs; http://www.thesevent...centricity.html ALSO! Thinking of posting an older fic that my wife and I wrote almost... god, 15 years ago? It has the original Phi in it, whose name is Kidman. QB is actually an AU of the universe that I write from. Here be a pdf on it if you're interested. It's from my book.:-) http://www.thesevent...ewrealspace.pdf

She doesn't seem to care. She's probably used to being hyper public. Phi's a little weirded out by it, though. Also, not dead, just pooling all my energy on my other book. I'm so close, man. So close.

Yeay! Queensbride ALL the things! Hey all, not dead. I have the next chapter all set in my head but I have stuff I have to do first. Prolly after holidays. I will reviews yours reviews a'for that.<3

They did?? Is voting done? I mean -cough- did the anonymous person who painted something resembling a Phi/Sidja yin/yang win?

Anyone still following the Queensbride channel? I am writing a chapt, it's just taking forever. In the meantime, another evil queen trailer! Mirror, Mirror Check the castle from the outside! It looks so much like Sidja's! I hope the queen in this one ends up with her servant guy. That would make me happy.

Sidja sure has been busy. I actually think this queen looks more like Her, but it remains to be seen how her voice and manner add up; http://justjared.buzznet.com/photo-gallery/2588268/snow-white-first-look-05/

Review comments! Finally! 0xymoron implant1 2011-10-19 I was going to write a review for at least two weeks but was to lazy. I thought that I had a lot of time before the story would be finished, but turns out that I was wrong. So I'm writing my review now. The story is just brilliant; it's fantastic. I think that this is the first high-quality femm slash that I've ever read. It's actually better than most of published slash romance books I've read! I love the plot and the heroines. I also appreciate the speed of publishing - there was never a long waiting for the new chapter. I hope that you will write something more about Phi and her Queen :-). Hey love, don't know if you or any of the commentors below will ever see this, because I too can be lazy, but cheers. The speed of the publishing had more to do with the fact that QB was already finished when I started posting it here. It just needed to be edited. Editing is hard and I needed the carrot-on-a-string that reviews can be. Skyro 2011-10-19 Oh ho!! So it's not over. Sidja is quite a crafty soul, pushing you to write more and more of Her incredible tales. This is a short chapter, but I think if it was longer than it would seem like there was just too much being detailed, overstuffed chapter. Also, thank you for the kind words in the reviews review. I'm glad to be some kind of support, specially to such a good writer. :-) It seems like Sidja might keep cracking the whip, not literally though, and making you write Adelphus. Sometimes literally, but She usually doesn't have enough room to do it right. So I'll keep looking for new chapter like I used to and looking forward to what else might happen. By the way, two things. 1. IT'S OVER 9000!!! XD. Yes! 2. If you are going to continue, it might be better to make the next couple of chapters into a sequal, break it off into an all new thing perhaps. I know I should, but I want to make sure new people read the first part first. It seems that now that Sidja is aware of Her own emotions towards Phi, She's going to be terribly jealous and perhaps over-protective of Phi when any woman lays her hands on Phi. So perhaps the new focus will be Sidja terrified that Her fathers "curse" will still end up preventing Her from being in love with Phi and someone will come along and try to steal Phi from Sidja. Just an idea. It remains to be seen. navs 2011-10-20 I should make a real account. There was never any need to, (nor any need to review) before this story came along. <3 Anyways, I've spent so much time both offline and rereading earlier chapters that I completely missed the fact that a new chapter was added. Oh Sidja. Your jealousy is, dare I say it, quite amusing and cute. And very irrational, but that kind of talking can get me maimed. Sidja says: I can't wait for when Phi wakes up. And I also can't wait to see exactly what happens to Averring. Methinks that the guards are going to have to teach him a well-deserved lesson... Someone should tell Averring not to drop the soap. Actually, no... leave him in the dark.(/end obligation to make bad prison joke) Psyconaught_omega and Saige offered to collaborate on that. The Queen hopes they do. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! Take as long as you need, one cannot rush art. and, on a parting note, congratulations. Queensbride is OVER 9000!!!!!! Thanks, love! It's slowly inching towards 10,000! Getting the next chapter up has been slow going because the Queen has STILL not settled on what course of action She wants to take. paint 2011-10-22 YAY it continues i was hoping this would not end so soon umm for me you've probably been working on it forever. I wonder will this female guard become a reoccurring character and be somehow important i think it would be interesting. Also i am glad to see Averring will get everything he deserves once you decided what that should be. I rarely save something and reread it but this one i am going to have to save somewhere so i can read it time and time again. Your writing is exceptional and i know i will want to revisit it and i am excited to see your still writing. Thanks, love. I'm eventually going to publish it in book form, but I have another project that needs to be done first so it'll be on here for a while. earthserpent 2011-10-22 keep going. :-)

Okay, so the Queen is still hammering out how She wants to proceed, but in the meantime, She's in a movie!