KahewaiHale

I need a beta for a Byaren (actually a Renbya) yaoi. My fanfict is a 39 page monster that is still unfinished. This is fluffy romance fanfiction and from the fanfictions that I have read my interpretation of Byakuya doesn't seem to be the usual. I think that I go too OOC at a certain point but I need a second opinion. I'm not sure if I should just go with it regardless, or try to do some damage control. The premise that started the story is a bit OOC to start out with. I also need someone to bounce ideas off of for how to proceed. All of the ideas that I have come up with lead to a little bit of angst followed by straight up cavity inducing fluff, which I don't really want to do. Oh and my story is somewhat of a detailed slow burn. It is post-Winter War.