I willingly admit I'm a flawed writer. I have issues with simple grammar and I'm really comma happy. (Trust me, I wish I wasn't.)
After 10 chapters and nearly 4,500 views, someone finally came along and turned my attention to the problem. Simple mechanics were getting in the way of letting them enjoy the story! Embarrassing as that is, I needed to see that. Some of the problems I've found in my work make me want to smack my head on my desk.
I've taken all the chapters down,except for the first. (I went back and fixed every single little error I could spot.) I intend on going through them one at a time and putting them back up. But I think I need some one with a fresh set of eyes to give it a look over and double check for small errors I may miss. (I'm not going to flood you. I'll give one chapter at a time.)
Title: Among Wolves
Rating: Adult +
Summary/Codes: Being Kidnapped by Werewolves for reproduction purposes was not on the top of her list of things that could happen. AFFO, BDSM, Beast, CR, D/s, Fingering, H/C, HJ, M/F, M/s, OC, Oral, Preg, SH, Slave, Solo, TF, Toys, UST, Voy, WD, WIP.
Orignal > HET
I consider it "Erotica" but it's not particularly heavy with it as the story progresses. (There is erotic content in the first two chapters and then only harassment from chapter 3 to 9.)It does have a plot.
I'm not sure how the Beta business works on AFF. I don't know if there's a system in place, or if it's done by e-mail exchange. I don't have a clue. (I'll be honest.) I really just need someone who is really handy with the polish. If you like what your read and you have suggestions I'm open to it. I'm not afraid of criticism, so long as it's constructive. (There's always room to improve.)
You can see the story here: Among Wolves If it's something you'd be interesting in being a Beta for, let me know!