Anesor

Just posted an excerpt from my original that hit the rocks. This short character intro is totally a result of the class I’m taking, as my villain is way more 3D than the terrible attempt years ago…

https://nanowrimo.org/participants/bucolic-scribe/novels/enlightenment-machine

This is a draft, and I’d like to revise, but I still keep the blank slate. filling in as journal at worst.  My revisions add 50-100% for length too.