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    BronxWench reacted to DemonGoddess in holy/celestial warriors   
    TAKE ME WITH YOU!!!!!
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    BronxWench got a reaction from JayDee in holy/celestial warriors   
    Gah! Not Horse Mpreg!
    ::runs screaming for the brain bleach::
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    BronxWench reacted to JayDee in holy/celestial warriors   
    It is "Differently Sane" King Ludvig's famed black stallion Cocotte, in the role of the horse Grane.
    So Magus' father, surely? Or is this Horse mpreg just to make BW whimper?
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    BronxWench reacted to JayDee in holy/celestial warriors   
    Would you mess with this woman?
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    BronxWench got a reaction from WillowDarkling in holy/celestial warriors   
    SGS, you've been around long enough to know that I'm pagan, and have been all my life. So yes, treating my beliefs cavalierly will put my back up. Consider it as having poked me.
    And warlocks are not magical, nor are witches, druids, shamans or witch doctors. I'll disregard the flippancy of the tooth fairy, in the spirit of being helpful. Witches practice magic. Witch doctors practice magic to some extent. Druids and shamans do not practice magic. They are more akin to priests and/or oracles. Warlocks are not a magical class in the real world, WoW notwithstanding. But none of them are magical creatures, unlike the fey, who are magical creatures.
    You can choose to disregard the real-world definitions of these roles, but in that case, you should not come here and ask for assistance with researching these things. All you do is frustrate those of us for whom these things have significance. Instead, consult the WoW Wiki.
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    BronxWench reacted to ChrissyQuinn in holy/celestial warriors   
    That is actually a very insensitive statement... but you probably don't realize that so I'm going to let it pass. But do keep in mind, there are still practitioners of non-judeo-christian religions. Like... Druids and Wiccans, even worshipers of Odin who might take offense to that statement above. So you're handling someone's religion here, of course people are going to get touchy.
    I think the main concern people have here is that you're going to shit all over someone's religion in the name of fiction, which is a legitimate concern. (i know this is contrary to my who cares he's writing fiction statement, but admittedly I was a few glasses into the evening, and oh the flippant shit I say when tipsy.)
    I would suggest picking up some of the viking sagas or early Irish and Welsh texts. You can get translations of a few of them on Amazon for free. And visit your local library.If you think about the most successful author of what I call super fantasy (elves, orcs, goblins etc.) it's Tolkien and the guy was a medievalist who borrowed heavily from Viking sagas (There is literally a saga about a guy named Frodi who has to destroy a ring),
    Also, I think it might be more impactful if you just have one set of gods you focus on and write a story about infighting among them. It would also mean less research for you, (compelling fantasy is research).
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    BronxWench got a reaction from WillowDarkling in holy/celestial warriors   
    I think my frustration here is a result of your asking for factual backup of what's largely a fictional concept. The Orc shamans from WarCraft 3 and WoW don't have any resemblance whatsoever to a real-life shaman, nor do the goblinoid witch doctors have any grounding in reality. Hence my frequent advise to you to make it up and stop looking for factual references for something when factual isn't what you want anyway. Just read the WoW Wiki instead and go from there to avoid getting sued.
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    BronxWench got a reaction from JayDee in Am I allowed to have an index?   
    You can put them in the main story summary, which avoids the chapter-spoilers. That's perfectly fine. You could even put them all at the top of the first chapter, if they don't fit in the summary field, which is only 240 characters.
    As long as they are somewhere a reader will see them, and know what to expect in the course of the story, we're good. The reasoning is that certain things are triggers, and we don't want readers getting blindsided by running into content they'd not willingly have read.
    And in the forum thread, if you wanted to include them in the index, next to each chapter, that's absolutely fine as well. Since readers would find the index url after reading a chapter, it certainly wouldn't be a spoiler for them.
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    BronxWench reacted to GeorgeGlass in AFF's Tales from the Shoutbox 2015   
    I tried to resist...
    Author: George Glass
    Summary: A man convicted of murdering his own wife and children is visited by a reporter who hopes to be the first to find out why he did it.
    Title: Snap
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    BronxWench reacted to PervOtaku in holy/celestial warriors   
    Your entire premise is off, because valkyries aren't warriors of the Norse gods, they are grim reapers for fallen human soldiers. I don't really recall any myths where god or the gods have an army of warriors. Such servents tend more to be messengers if anything. Most wars in the old myths where the gods are involved are proxy wars where each god choses a human side to represent them and helps their guys out in much smaller ways, or battles that are so big that only the gods themselves can fight in them.
    The view of Norse valktries or Judeo-Christian angels as a army of heavenly warriors comes more from modern pop culture, which usually borrows names from old myths more than it does portray the myths faithfully.
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    BronxWench reacted to DemonGoddess in Crossover query   
    aha! They're muddy finger painters!
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    BronxWench reacted to JayDee in Crossover query   
    Best avoided. It's just a nasty, mean-spirited little thing which will need the trigger tags. Would have been better if I'd gone for Orcs gathered round painting another, nude, Orc and discussing their dislike of more conceptual art.
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    BronxWench reacted to JayDee in Crossover query   
    Thanks for confirming this, yes, it mostly takes place close to the Misty Mountains, known for their salmon fishing, snowboarding and Orc figure painting studios.
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    BronxWench reacted to DemonGoddess in Crossover query   
    Orc figure painting???
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    BronxWench reacted to JayDee in Crossover query   
    Sadly the fine art won't make it into the oneshot; this one features the less cultured Orcs. The sort who give the delicate, sensitive aesthete orcs of brush and canvas a bad name.
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    BronxWench got a reaction from WillowDarkling in Story recs   
    It's here on AFF, too, so you don't need to wander off to strange sites...
    Unintentionally Yours by Dinkel
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    BronxWench got a reaction from ChrissyQuinn in Story recs   
    It's here on AFF, too, so you don't need to wander off to strange sites...
    Unintentionally Yours by Dinkel
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    BronxWench got a reaction from DemonGoddess in Story recs   
    It's here on AFF, too, so you don't need to wander off to strange sites...
    Unintentionally Yours by Dinkel
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    BronxWench reacted to ChrissyQuinn in AFF's Tales from the Shoutbox 2015   
    Welcome Goblins and Ghouls!
    I'm offering you all the chance to participate in a scare with some flair! That is of course Tales from the Shout Box, a collection of one shot original fiction with a Halloween theme from our wicked wordsmiths here on Adult-fanfiction.org.

    Guidlines:
    One Shot (Max. 50k words) Halloween element (Ghosts, witches, werewolves, vampires, demons... things that go bump in the night) Original Fiction At the top each story MUST include the tags for your content. At the bottom include a link to your profile. Before you add your story please add a 255 character summary of your content here in your post declaring your interest. ​On the 25th of October, I will post in the archives a story titled "AFF's Tales from the Shoutbox 2015" and add collaborators (I think that's how it works). You may add more than one story as long as it fits the Halloween theme. Also, the story does not have to be sexual in nature.
    If you're interested please reply with your pen name on the archives, a short description of what you might write about and the title if you don't have a title that's fine just put (unknown). (Example: see below). I will keep track here of those author's interested. We might even vote on the best story or something too... who knows.
    Story link: Here

    Participating Authors
    ChrissyQuinn - Summary: Evan and Garrett end up in the haunted sacred circle of the werewolves after Evan claims ghosts aren't real. Title: Ghosts don't Exist, Says the Vampire to the Werewolf Tahn - Summary - Can a ghost find love with the daughter of the one he gave his life to save? Title: From the Ashes. KoKoa_B - Summary/Synopsis: News channels start to report sightings of aliens on the afternoon of Halloween. Is it a hoax or is this the real thing? Title: The Invasion
    BronxWench - Summary: The veil is thin at Samhain, and dark things are stirring at the turn of the year. Will Teagan survive his first Ritual? Title:(Unknown) Joe Long - Summary: Joe, Hannah and a handful of their teenage friends and family from One Thousand Apologies conclude their Halloween party is lame and head to a cemetery in the midst of the dark woods in search of Becky, the infamous local ghost. Title: Becky's Grave CL Mustafic -Summary: Will and Pete loved each other in a time when doing so could get you killed. Flash forward seventy-five years and you can still find people that wouldn't think twice about doing just that to a couple of 'faggots'. What happens every Halloween night at the abandoned and reputedly haunted house at the end of Loon Lane might not change any bigoted opinions but it will make you think twice about what's behind the next glory hole...- Title: The Glory Hole to Hell Perverted_Pages - Summary: Dunno yet, just know it's going to be ghastly. Title: (Unknown) Dirty Angel - Summary: Carrie goes to her first Halloween party and once again, with the help of her two friends Libido and Alcohol, gets herself into a situation that she never saw coming. Title: A Tricky Treat Magusfang - Summary: Gayle works in a small office and as the nerdy girl she is all but invisible to the men around her. But she decides to make some drastic changes and she garners more attention than she planned on at the office Halloween party. Title: Girls Who Wear Glasses Juleslea - Summary: Jessy hasn't been home since school started, despite her mom's constant nagging. Its only an hour away, so she has no excuse, and with the family's Halloween tradition falling on a Saturday, she no longer has a choice. Maybe she's getting too old for the stuff; maybe she's just too stressed from school; and maybe everything at home is not as normal as it seems. Title: Who Says You Can't Go Home George Glass - Summary: A man convicted of murdering his own wife and children is visited by a reporter who hopes to be the first to find out why he did it. [Working] Title: Confession is Bad for the Soul JayDee - Summary: A particularly unpleasant magic bomb will kill everybody at a Halloween party, and most of the surrounding block, if Shannon the Succubus can't find the bombmaker and get them to disarm it the only way she knows how. ie, with snuggling. Title (subject to change): Succubi With Clean Faces Tahn - Summary:You are on one side of the door, but bad things await on both sides, what will you do? Title: Death has an Ugly Face


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    BronxWench got a reaction from WillowDarkling in Castle TV/Bleach   
    Merely changing the players is not actually sufficient to make a story unique. In order for the story to be merely similar, it would need to have substantive differences in setting as well as in the actual sequence of events in the story. It's one thing to be inspired by a story and write something influenced by it, but my caution to anyone taking this challenge is that merely copying that Castle story and substituting Bracken will not be permitted here.
    If anyone taking this challenge needs or wants clarification, I'm happy to assist. However, the site's Terms of Service is pretty clear.
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    BronxWench got a reaction from WillowDarkling in Castle TV/Bleach   
    I'm going to hope, very emphatically, that you are not asking someone to copy and paste an existing story and simply change characters and a few minor details. We consider that plagiarism here, and we frown on that sort of thing.
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    BronxWench got a reaction from ChrissyQuinn in holy/celestial warriors   
    I think my frustration here is a result of your asking for factual backup of what's largely a fictional concept. The Orc shamans from WarCraft 3 and WoW don't have any resemblance whatsoever to a real-life shaman, nor do the goblinoid witch doctors have any grounding in reality. Hence my frequent advise to you to make it up and stop looking for factual references for something when factual isn't what you want anyway. Just read the WoW Wiki instead and go from there to avoid getting sued.
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    BronxWench got a reaction from DemonGoddess in holy/celestial warriors   
    I think my frustration here is a result of your asking for factual backup of what's largely a fictional concept. The Orc shamans from WarCraft 3 and WoW don't have any resemblance whatsoever to a real-life shaman, nor do the goblinoid witch doctors have any grounding in reality. Hence my frequent advise to you to make it up and stop looking for factual references for something when factual isn't what you want anyway. Just read the WoW Wiki instead and go from there to avoid getting sued.
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    BronxWench got a reaction from DemonGoddess in Are Reader Directed Stories Kosher   
    We have had a couple of reader-directed stories posted here, and we do allow them, within certain parameters.
    The voting and discussion does need to take place here on the forums, but if you use the threads where we have review replies, guests can read and respond to your post. This gives everyone a chance to vote and discuss the story.
    The basic premise of the story can be treated as a prologue, I believe, which would make it story content. An author's note of no more than 600 words explaining how this works, with the url for the forum thread, is fine.
    We don't have a specific tag for a reader-directed story, but we do ask that you tag for what content you think will be included, and if anything unexpected comes up, you can tag that specific chapter with the additional warnings as an author's note.
    In short, we'll work with you to make this story work for you and the readers, within our ToS. We're good at that.
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    BronxWench got a reaction from WillowDarkling in Karate Kid (2010)   
    @Alrayt:
    Just to clarify the definition of the word "cuckold," it is a man whose wife, NOT mother, is cheating on him. http://www.thefreedictionary.com/cuckold
    A woman in the same situation is a cuckquean. http://www.grammarphobia.com/blog/2013/10/cuckquean.html
    Readers can be just as literate as writers, you know.
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