Hello everyone! I finally made this. I am slow I know.
So. Excepting that very first one, I will post all review responses and notes in here. I waited on updating until I could post to the forums, so I could answer my reviews first.
Hah, I am such a moron, I posted this without putting a link to ATL in here. Whoops! Sorry!
Another Chance to Live(rewrite version)
So. I went to upload it yesterday, and I couldn't find the file on my USB anywhere. And I was panicking because I had typed it up on my friends laptop who doesn't know I write stories like that. And I had thought I'd accidentally saved the 2nd chapter to their laptop. So I went rushing over there and looked for it all over their hard drive, and was relieved to discover myself to be mistaken. So, I go back home and putt around on my puter, and plug in my H: USB and there, lo and behold it was. I felt prettty stupid too. Oh well. So, it would have been updated yesterday but I went spastic. Anyway.
I'd love to know what everyone thought. Reviews would help, especially since I'd love to know what everyone thought of the rewrite. If it actually is any better, haha.
My "betas"/best friends are lovely and absent but much love to Jameie, Nat, Tamm, Perry, Jakey, Jameson, and Matty. They really helped me keep writing my bullshit. <33 I love ya guys.
Aria- Thanks for your review! First one of my story, and it made my night! <3 Hope you keep reading, and hope you enjoy the update! Thanks again!
Smint45- I love you in a non weird way! Your reviews always make my day! You're probably one of my most faithful readers. I am so glad you liked the new version. I was worried none of my readers would like it because it's (I think personally) much different already than the last. Hope you enjoy the new chapter! Thanks again so much.
Bambi4real- I know this is hard to believe, but the original story had a happy ending. I know it didn't seem like it would, but I had almost 60 chapters typed for it, and around the, err, 40? The story was already much happier. I never posted them because I felt they weren't up to par with my standards. So, yes the story has a similar ending to the other one, but this one will not be as...confusing and vague about what is going on. And, the King and Jester are move vividly good in this one. Does that answer your question? I hope so. Hope you enjoyed the new version better, and hope you keep reading.
Thanks so much everyone, and hope to see you all in the near future. <3