The Dead One

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Throws arms up in victory...yes! So gonna love this one. *evil grin.* Thank you!

Not yet. And thanks <3

Bah, you worded it so much better than what I was trying. haha Well I hope it works and becomes much easier on you guys in the long run. <3

It's a possibility that the SaI and Naru was deleted... But I'm still looking, and will let you know. And your welcome.

If you don't mind Yoai.... heh, I wouldn't mind taking this up.... I can't write heat to save my own life.

Up for adoption! Title: Sono Teishu Pairing: SasuNaru Info: I actually took the story down, I have the proulgue and the first chapter, I can send Via email and you can go based off of it, or change and mold it to something you feel happy with. Special request for adoption: No main character death, Happy ending. ( If you can do these two things that I give you free reign to do/change as you please. And post link here so I can drool read it, please. ) Plot: Naruto is top host for a night club. It comes with the masses of fan's that shower him with gifts and requests, he never takes any of them though. At least until a new customer gets dragged in by his friends. Something's in the air between them, he knows it the other man knows. So Sasuke starts frequenting the club nightly. However, Naruto always denies spending time outside of work with him. Why? The rules are simple, sleep with a customer and you get fired. ' We sell fantasies, not bodies. ' So Naruto has to decide if Sasuke is the one. Does he really want to lose his job over a customer? There was this, you don't have to use if you don't want to, I just thought it was a fun side to the fic. Naruto's best friend Ino, owns her own adult store. Where Naruto usually spends his days trying to embarrass her customers.

That's what I'm slowly doing... Deciding which stories to part with. lol. I don't mind setting this up in the others like Twilight, HP. Epically if it makes it easier for everyone show show proof that they gave it to someone and got the okay. All right, I shall do that. Edit: Sorry It wasn't here on aff it was on FF. *sweat drops*

Okay credit for finding thew two ShikaNeji go to my lovely and sweet MayaNara The first one is jbmcdragon's It Started With A Puzzle. link The second one is penname's Unspoken Rules. link Will update with the last story

Animehead, Daydreamer, YuukoUchiha( FF) Ashe365, Sangostar, Trulywicked, caidanu. There are a lot more people... *thinks*

Okay here she has a lot of good ones Yuuko <3

I can ask around for you, possibly have links today. goes off to ask... they sound interesting.

Ahh, I love SaiNaru and SasSaiNaru even better *whistles* If you have a Y!gallery account I can link you to clubs for all of them. *nods.* I am very intersted as long as there is no character death. *grabby hands.*

That's what I was kinda hoping. And hoping it would stop some plagiarism ( Seeing way to many on LJ, some authors set up a community to warn people of plagiarists on that site, (names.) since Lj won't take it down unless it was stolen from copyrighted material. So the place has become a haven for plagiarists.) Any case..... I was hoping to make it easier on everyone. ( Including myself, just haven't decided what I should give up on, since I'm drowning.) But I didn't know they could post them in the forums. * whistles.* lol well, this way if it does get used, it will be all in one thread? haha, right. Now I just hope this gets used.

It doesn't, ( As long as you have permission from the original author.) and I'm really hoping that instead of just dropping them, and posting them everywhere else people will use the form. So we can keep better track of what is has been given a home or not. Here is Demongoddess061 post in the FAQS section about abandoned ( homeless stories) link <3 I hope it does become of use. And they do lose interest to fast. * Whistles* *coughs*

Lately it seems a lot of people are leaving the fandom. I also know that many don't like the idea of someone else writing for them... But for those whom are leaving and want to give their story up for adoption... Can leave a link to the story here or future plots they won't do, to be given happy homes of someone who will see it finished and joining the masses of complete fiction. ( Or lack there of.) A rule: If you see someone responding in regards to taking over a fic or plot, please don't interfere unless they change their minds. This way we keep the adoptions clean and happy. Also please respect the authors wishes on how they wanted the fic to end or continue, unless you are given free reign to do as you please. Remember to credit the original author as well. And once you start the fic, link back to it here, so we may enjoy it as well. Edit: Once something has been claimed please mark the story adopted and leave it up as proof. Thanks guys. Adopt a fic on LJ

I need someone willing to fix grammar that's my problem and I just need someone to go over my One shots and edit them for me. My pairings vary with each anywhere from SasuNaruSasu To KibaNaru as well as ShinoNaruto. Etc. . . What I write: Yaoi ( Of course) Smut, Angst, Slight violence not heavy. Fluff, Light BDSM, Maybe some D/s, Humor, Dark fics, Fantasy, Horror, Supernatural. Anyone whom can help I would love forever. Haha

I need a beta for my story Fire gods bride really I need someone to fix Grammar and take things out if it's to much. Someone who will change what needs to be changed, and be okay with musing with me over the story. So grammar, sentence structure, and run on sentences are my problems. Anyone? please and thanks. If you do just drop me an email sammie.girl169@yahoo.com Naruto is handed over to the Fire god as a bride without hesitation he was betrayed by his village how will he survive in the hands of a god? does Sasuke really intend to take a man as a bride? The below image is the cover for the story. Just felt like showing it. ------------------------------------------------

Okay so I am in need of a beta for some original stories. I want someone who will help with grammar, sentence structure who will take things out when it's to much. <3 What to except from me: Yaoi, Smut, Humor, Dark-fics. (Sometimes) Fluffy, Fantasy, Angst. That's the sum of it. Any questions, drop me a line. <3 Sammie.girl169@gmail.com

It's happening for a lot of writers and a lot of fandoms including originals. A lot of people are falling from fandom's and many don't seem to be interested in originals for some reason. It's such a sad thing though. However I just can't stop writing, because it's what I want. lol Though one author started this YuukoUchiha's Good neighbor project I think it's a good idea to get the love going again. And I don't think you suck no author sucks. every one is entitled to write the way they want.

Are you familiar with Naruto?

Okay Well lets see I want a co author. The story Idea if KakashiNaruto and ItachiSasuke and some point in the story a foursome. Why? I don't know why I just thought it would be awesome. The setting I thought Kakashi owns a record store where Naruto starts working. Naruto's friends with Sasuke and Itachi. and eh, well that's the gernal idea. I'll even let the co-author post the story on their profile on Aff if they want. The only thing I ask is that you have/ or can make a Y! gallery account Because the story is for a club there as well. I don't write the following so you'll never have to worry about it being brought up. Necrophilia, shouta, guro, golden showers, scat, Bestiality, (I think that's the most of it.) And well, I guess that covers the basics.

I do that to sometimes. Right now on Y, I got a few I'm doing. lol Though it only helps me sometimes. I usually get stuck half way through. I think I dried my smut muses. XD

It happens to me way to often that's why I bought a cheap flash drive and back up my stories every few days. Sorry to hear though it always sucks and its a depressing thing.

Lack of inspiration's happening a lot to me lately. So I do a range of things Writing memes, prompts, listen to music and toss idea's back and forth with a few other authors I know on Y!gallery. Or I go read a bit see if anything sparks my muses. mostly I just glare at the word-pad and hope something comes out. lol