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    The Sons

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    The Sons

    Firstly, thank you for another kind review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and your veg/goku is definitely in the works. Yes, I really do love a dominant Goku. He's the embodiment of power, and I don't like when he's portrayed as a fluffy character. I stuck with the fic ultimately because I'm committed to it. I needed the scene to be perfect, and I'm happy that you feel it came together nicely. I appreciate it. YES! A villain. And a very unusual one at that. It came to me suddenly one day, and it's really going to transform this fic into something with an actual storyline, that will have a conclusion (but not for a very long time). Again, you'll have to wait and find out. The promise will also be revealed, but not until the end. (I will give a hint at the promise tho': It was made when Vegeta first came to earth and fought Goku.) Thanks again. Great Question! And luckily one I'm willing to answer, as I don't think it'll ruin any storyline. Yes, Bulma is quite aware of Vegeta's little empire he's building for himself. She is his queen after all. If you remember at the end chapter 3, When Goten and Trunks ran through the kitchen, the remark that Dr. Briefs makes "Those Saiyans love to play", yeah... Bulma's parents know too. And um... I have some plans for them as well. *muahahahaha*
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    The Sons

    Update: Chapter 5 is 95% finished, and should be posted within a few days!
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    A Real Pain in the Ass

    The characters in this fandom are martial artists, and are amazingly flexible. They also posses super-human strength, as they are aliens. That's why Goten was able to maintain the position. Vegeta happens to be one of the strongest beings in the universe, that's why Goten was extremely reluctant to flee and/or fight Vegeta, and instead chose to submit to him. As for the scene itself, I never actually worked out the mechanics of getting spanked bent over. I've seen pictures of others in that position, so I assumed it was a basic spank position. now i have to do spank research
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    A Real Pain in the Ass

    A Real Pain in the Ass Discuss here! First let me thank you for reading my fiction, and taking the time to write a review. I really appreciate it I agree with you that the switching of POV was a little confusing in some places. After reading (and re-reading) i thought the end really fell apart, and since you left your review I have edited those parts to be more specific as to who's POV you are reading from, however I do want to make clear that I intended for the story itself to be told from a third person perspective. As far as the relationship of this couple, it is a somewhat taboo pairing, and having a knowledge of the fandom is really crucial in order to understand many of the references in the fiction. This is also a spin-off from an earlier fic I wrote called Steam Bath, which was inspired by fanart from an artist on Tumblr, this fic also references many of the "Bad Goten" themes that artist depicts, which is where the need for corporal punishment (especially by Vegeta) comes from. I have to respectfully disagree with the confusion of Gotens position in this fiction. I alluded to the fact that Goten would be bent at the waist, two separate times in the fic. Once when Vegeta gave the order, and again when Goten actually did bend over. Thank you again for reviewing, it helped a lot also: lol@Vatenga
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    A Real Pain in the Ass

    A Real Pain in the Ass by: Wickedeve Goten gets a stern talking to.... { spank, one shot, shortfic, yaoi. }
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    The Sons

    A quick update: I currently have half of chapter 5 written, and am working on finishing it. Please bear w/ me a lil' longer
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    Steam Bath

    Discuss Steam Bath here!
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    Steam Bath

    Steam Bath by: Wickedeve Inspired by artwork from Rutobuka Goku gets some company in the shower... { soncest / yaoi }
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    Hanamae Moon

    Discuss Hanamae Moon here: Yes, this was a very short fic, and it was my first attempt at writing a fiction based on a fanart drawing I'd come across. I'm glad you enjoyed the pairing though, thank you very much.
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    The Sons

    Discuss The Sons here. I wanted to use this thread to reply to some of the reviews I've gotten: Thank you for checking out my fic! I've never come across a fic like this myself, and I'm glad you were curious enough to take a peek. LOL, thank you very much. Don't worry, I'm just as perverted! This fic will become extremely dark and scary in the future.... grab a blankie. And more is on the way! As of the date this response, I have three future chapters drafted. Thank you for the compliments Like I mentioned before, there are more chapters in the works. Goku/Videl will be in Chapter 5, it will be......INTENSE! Yeah, Goku is EXTREMELY pissed at Goten, and not because he doesn't want Goten to be in love with Trunks, it's that Goku wants to be "the first". In this A/U Goku has a very Saiyan personality, and his outlet is purely sexual. The reason for that will be revealed soon. Again, thank you for the kind review.
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    In Your Image

    In Your Image By: Wickedeve Inspired by artwork from Rutobuka A DBZ fic: Trunks finds himself transported to a strange place, and comes face to face with a legend. { Yaoi, Incest, Anal, Asphyxiation }
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    In Your Image

    Discuss here.
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    jenerik_brand

    jenerik_brand no longer updates here at AFF You can find her here; http://jenerik-brand.livejournal.com/
  15. Updated 'The Sons' after waaay too long a time.