GaryStargazer

Suppose I will introduce myself ... Names Gary. I'm 28 Friend of mine talked me into trying my hand at writing naughty stories a bit ago so i tried writing some stuff and then put it up here... A bit about myself? Well for one I hate fan fiction ... yea I know that sounds odd given where I am but i only write and read Original stuff. I won't go into why I dislike fanfic's here. It's not the place or time for it. My writing style though it still needs to be polished and improved seems to focus on a playful light hearted mood most of the time ... Currently I have two stories on here, one is a incest one about a brother and sister. The other a F/F one that incorporates a bit of drama and action into it. I will eventually write a m/m story but if I do it will be specifically anti-yaoi. I feel the site is flooded with too much of it to the point it's getting ridiculous. If I wrote a M/M story I will probably make it very manly and masculine with like ... bikers or something ... just to break the yaoi fan's poor brains XD Anyhoo I guess that's it for now. >:3

Well ... at the very least write a review on it if it made you so happy. who knows ... the author might some day look back to it and if they see a review that is almost 5 years later ... may be impressed that someone took the time to read their out dated story and still wants a sequal 5 years down the road. >:3

Gary is my real life name. Stargazer is the rough translation of the tribal name of my family before they were of course wiped/forced out with the rest of the native americans.

I can scarcely believe that english is not your first language ... Now I truly am impressed. To over come such adversity and bloom the talent you have. As i stated in my review of your story yes I would like help. I suppose I will detail more info in a message seeing as how this thread is not the place to discuss such matters and I do not know how strict this place is on keeping things on topic. Some of the boards I frequent are very brutal about on topic post's.

I'm necroing a post ... sue me XD I agree there is way way way ... WAY .... WAY too damn much yaoi out there. I'm so sick of it too. I mean don't get me wrong I have no disrespect for the style of writing but you go looking through stories around here on AFF and unless its got a m/m tag on it. It has no views, ratings, or votes what so ever. My current story which mind you I feel is a damn good one. I love the one I'm writing right now ... is F/F. That being in direct contras to what seems to be the favored thing here it's only gotten 100+ hits in over a week with 4 chapters updated so far. 3 votes and no reviews. An author that shall remain nameless put out a M/M of malfoy butt raping harry, it looks like it was written by a 12 year old and within one day it had 500 hits and like 10+ reviews and a 5 star vote average of about 200 votes, and it was one chapter ... I read the thing it was horrible, spelling errors everywhere, run on sentences ... clustered paragraph and poor character interaction ... ugh!! Can you tell I'm feeling a bit moody over the situation? If you're gonna be a rabbit fan girl/boy, at least be one with taste ...

Well .. I wanted to place this here to try to recommend my latest story. I am really enjoying writing this one and I would love to get more feed back on it ... However I noticed 90% of stories that get hits/reviews are the M/M ones so since this is directly parallel with the popular trend here. i figured It could use all the recommendation it can get. >:3 The story is on going and the drama and love between the heroines will develop as the chapters continue. This is a totally new form of writing for me what with the action that will be taking place within it but I hope that everyone enjoys it. Oh yea .. I guess I will do the official form .. Title: Waltz of Blades Author: Gary Stargazer Rating: Adult+ Summary: It's a story about two women who fall in love with one another, however it will contain quite a bit of drama and action in it. Fandom: Original URL or Site link: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600100875 Thanks for looking at this. I hope it's not too shameless to recommend one's own work. Thank you. Gary