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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in Title Help   
    To be fair, Kirk did start the whole boldly going where no man has gone before thing and Spock is likely keeping the ship logs professional.
    Nevermind the enterprise would be hook up and fling central for everybody aboard the mini city flying through space.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Wilde_Guess in Title Help   
    Hi, InvidiaRed
    I would be interested in reading Doctor McCoy’s “Medical Officer’s Log,” myself.
    Damnit, Jim!  I’m a Doctor, not a…  Oh fuck, I am a doctor!  Okay, whip it out, and let’s see what you’ve caught this week…
    Cheers!
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in Happy endings (literally or figuratively) or tragic endings?   
    It depends on genre mostly. I like endings where the character breaks even or if they’re doomed they at least helped turned the tide in some small manner even if its just that they gave hope no matter how small or fling a light into a darkened future. Hope is fickle like that but like a stubborn ember hope is so very resilient just when you think you’ve snuffed it out.
    Some stories there can be no happy ending. Like in dark settings.
    That said, I hate tragic endings and try to avoid them even if the characters themselves don’t see it. ( I think that might be part of reading so much greek tragedies in high-school)
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Wilde_Guess in InvidiaRed's review responses   
    From Thundercloud on July 01, 2023
    Cool story with a good mystery build up as the lead persons work on solving their situation. My only complaint would be that the first (and currently only) chapter ends with fade to black when things-are-just-to-revealed situation so I cannot tell if this is good or excellent.

    Keep the good work!
    Next chapter is nearly ready. Trying to find that sweet spot of not too much and not enough is rather intricate isnt it?
    The party is just starting!
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Wilde_Guess in Title Help   
    To be fair, Kirk did start the whole boldly going where no man has gone before thing and Spock is likely keeping the ship logs professional.
    Nevermind the enterprise would be hook up and fling central for everybody aboard the mini city flying through space.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in Title Help   
    To be fair, Kirk did start the whole boldly going where no man has gone before thing and Spock is likely keeping the ship logs professional.
    Nevermind the enterprise would be hook up and fling central for everybody aboard the mini city flying through space.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to BronxWench in Title Help   
    I would, but then again, I am a die-hard Trekkie.  
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Desiderius Price in Title Help   
    Concur with @BronxWench  Most definitely think of Star Trek.  So, no @Wilde_Guess I don’t think it’s something that gets flushed down the Captain’s head.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to BronxWench in Title Help   
    Damn, those are all way better than anything I was coming up with…  
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Wilde_Guess in Title Help   
    Hi, GeorgeGlass.
    By itself, no.  While the spaceships from the Star Trek universe keep Captain’s and Ship’s Logs, other ships of notable size also keep Ship’s Logs, and the ship’s Captain might also keep a “Captain’s Log” or journal/diary of personal observations he or she doesn’t wish to keep in the main ship’s log.
    Seeing the erotica/pornographic bent of this site, I would also assume that the “Captain” just might be well-endowed (or tragically not endowed,) and was (at least trying) to get “busy.”
    Cheers!
     
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Wilde_Guess in Count To Infinity   
    42269.  Really?  Two hundred eleven couples doing that?  Oh, well; happy Friday!
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Deadman in Scooby Gang Time   
    @InvidiaRed

    Just FYI, if you’re interested, there’s a new chapter up.

    https://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/72502-scooby-gang-time/?do=findComment&comment=446333
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Deadman in Happy endings (literally or figuratively) or tragic endings?   
    It depends on genre mostly. I like endings where the character breaks even or if they’re doomed they at least helped turned the tide in some small manner even if its just that they gave hope no matter how small or fling a light into a darkened future. Hope is fickle like that but like a stubborn ember hope is so very resilient just when you think you’ve snuffed it out.
    Some stories there can be no happy ending. Like in dark settings.
    That said, I hate tragic endings and try to avoid them even if the characters themselves don’t see it. ( I think that might be part of reading so much greek tragedies in high-school)
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Wilde_Guess in Happy endings (literally or figuratively) or tragic endings?   
    It depends on genre mostly. I like endings where the character breaks even or if they’re doomed they at least helped turned the tide in some small manner even if its just that they gave hope no matter how small or fling a light into a darkened future. Hope is fickle like that but like a stubborn ember hope is so very resilient just when you think you’ve snuffed it out.
    Some stories there can be no happy ending. Like in dark settings.
    That said, I hate tragic endings and try to avoid them even if the characters themselves don’t see it. ( I think that might be part of reading so much greek tragedies in high-school)
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Wilde_Guess in Count To Infinity   
    Maybe so, but 42202 is still three greater.  It’s also the zip code for Adairville, KY.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in New? Introduce Yourself!   
    Indeed! I will always say if you want to write a story start with fanfiction. Glad to see you and welcome aboard, May your creativity be boundless and your words many! 😊
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Desiderius Price in New? Introduce Yourself!   
    Indeed! I will always say if you want to write a story start with fanfiction. Glad to see you and welcome aboard, May your creativity be boundless and your words many! 😊
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Deadman in sex toys in stories   
    I think people really do need to think more pornographically to be honest when it comes to magic. Casters are still people and adults get horny all the time. Sex toys going invisible and or incorporeal for private time. Privacy spells, erotic illusions, anonymous rooms
    lubricating and animating spells go without mention cause how obvious those are. Rendezvous and other ways of hiding secret notes for meet ups.
    fertility and virility potions to aid and outright against procreation, aphrodisiacs. Lets be honest, the people going to hogwarts are fucking and they’re doing it often.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Desiderius Price in Count To Infinity   
    Forty Two Thousand and Fifty Three
    42053
    To be odd is to be not even but there comes a point upon the spindle head where both becomes one and the same. Definitions merge immutable.
     
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Wilde_Guess in sex toys in stories   
    Hi, all.
    Nothing at all wrong with PWP when compared with plotted written porn.  But like you also just pointed out, once you start asking (and answering) questions, then the plot bunnies harness up, and the story takes off for places uncharted.
    I suppose you could say a similar thing about human life in general.  As a rule, we are social beings and sexual activity, like most other human activities, tends to be more interesting when done in groups of more than one.  My Dinner with Andre was well-received, both when it came out and today.  While My Assignation with Andrea  would more likely be the generic “Pornhub Two-Reeler,” it could also be so much more artistically, even while being just as erotically explicit if not more.
    While magical worlds, whether JKR’s or otherwise, can have their own unique gimmicks, in the end they still involve people, with all that implies.  Some people are boring, and others not-so-much.  And imagination can take you and your reader to the strangest places.  Imagine that Hagrid is a closet felcher, and that he unknowingly interrupts Professor (Crouch) Moody’s hallway discipline of Draco Malfoy during The Goblet of Fire.  Further, imagine that the human transfiguration doesn’t wear off until after Hagrid has enjoyed some mid-morning entertainment.  What if Draco liked it?  😉
    Cheers!
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Desiderius Price in sex toys in stories   
    Yep.  And mentally I make PWP out to be “plot, what plot?” more than “porn w/o plot”, though both apply.  So, technically, the little unreleased tale makes everything I’ve posted so far… BACKSTORY.
    Yep, though the group of one allows for some interesting context too.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Wilde_Guess in sex toys in stories   
    I think people really do need to think more pornographically to be honest when it comes to magic. Casters are still people and adults get horny all the time. Sex toys going invisible and or incorporeal for private time. Privacy spells, erotic illusions, anonymous rooms
    lubricating and animating spells go without mention cause how obvious those are. Rendezvous and other ways of hiding secret notes for meet ups.
    fertility and virility potions to aid and outright against procreation, aphrodisiacs. Lets be honest, the people going to hogwarts are fucking and they’re doing it often.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Desiderius Price in sex toys in stories   
    I think people really do need to think more pornographically to be honest when it comes to magic. Casters are still people and adults get horny all the time. Sex toys going invisible and or incorporeal for private time. Privacy spells, erotic illusions, anonymous rooms
    lubricating and animating spells go without mention cause how obvious those are. Rendezvous and other ways of hiding secret notes for meet ups.
    fertility and virility potions to aid and outright against procreation, aphrodisiacs. Lets be honest, the people going to hogwarts are fucking and they’re doing it often.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from kagome26isawsome in sex toys in stories   
    I believe the phrase on tumblr is anything is a dildo if you try hard enough.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Desiderius Price in sex toys in stories   
    I believe the phrase on tumblr is anything is a dildo if you try hard enough.
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