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    InvidiaRed reacted to WarrenTheConey in Isn't a 'gender swap', essentially making a new character?   
    I posted my story with the proper tags, and a short description of what changes where made to the canon universe.
    I think I'll keep doing that from this point forward.
    Thanks for the advice everyone.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Deadman in Isn't a 'gender swap', essentially making a new character?   
    I would say so personally. I mean, most characters are the gender they are for a reason. Particularly if the character has appeared on screen, like most of mine have.

    So I prefer to create an OC rather than gender bend a character. Or I just shift the sexuality of the character. More than a few of the female characters I write about have intense relationships with other women. Though most of them aren’t explicitly lesbians. So occasionally I just give them a broader sexuality, usually bisexual.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to GeorgeGlass in George Glass' Review Responses -- Original Fiction   
    From @InvidiaRed on December 26, 2023
    Since this was medieval fantasy and not historical fiction, I wasn’t even trying for historical accuracy; the concept of “detachment" was just something I made up to help explain why Gareth ended up at the stables. 
    Maybe, but if so, his envy is misplaced. I have a friend who is very well hung, and from what I know, it has done his sex life far more harm than good. Gareth’s “deformity” was inspired by that. 
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in Winter Holiday 2023   
    Can’t wait to read it lol finally got back to my trust old laptop
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    InvidiaRed reacted to GeorgeGlass in Winter Holiday 2023   
    My story is posted!
    Mount
    Summary: In a world of human knights and their semi-anthropomorphic horses, a young man discovers that his new job at the stable carries more responsibilities than he expected.
    Tags: Anthro, MF, Oral
     
    Also, IR, I took the liberty of adding a link to the Winter Holiday story in the archive to the top post in this thread. 
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    InvidiaRed reacted to BronxWench in Major Character Death Tag?   
    There are two options. If the character is central to the story, even if they die offstage, so to speak, I‘d recommend the Major Character Death (MCD) tag. If the character is not central to the story, you could use the Minor Character Death (MiCD) tag, to alert readers to the death of a character without having them pull their hair out over losing one of the stars of the canon.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Desiderius Price in Count To Infinity   
    43019!
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    InvidiaRed reacted to BronxWench in Can a tramp stamp tattoo go anywhere?   
    The location of a tramp stamp is fairly specific, as @GeorgeGlass noted. In general, it’s placed so that wearing pants/skirts that fasten around the waist or even a bit lower would hide the tattoo. Wearing very low-rise pants would, however, reveal the tattoo, as would a bikini bathing suit, thong panties, and so on. 
    I suppose one could use a tramp stamp as a sort of claim tattoo, but it seems odd that a man possessive enough to ink his woman with a claim mark would place it where she’d have to dress provocatively for it to show. It’s counter-intuitive, I’d think. “If you can see the crack of her ass, you can see she’s mine because the tattoo says so.”  Unless, of course, his thing is to have her on display, in which case, go for it.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in Can a tramp stamp tattoo go anywhere?   
    A tramp stamp is any tattoo that is visible on the lower back to the buttocks and may contain salacious or eye catching images.
     
    🤣 Had a friend whose boyfriend was a tattoo artist so I may or may not and will neither confirm nor deny lol.
     
    and they had Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here 😂
    we thought it might have meaning but nope she was a world class troll.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Deadman in Can a tramp stamp tattoo go anywhere?   
    A tramp stamp is any tattoo that is visible on the lower back to the buttocks and may contain salacious or eye catching images.
     
    🤣 Had a friend whose boyfriend was a tattoo artist so I may or may not and will neither confirm nor deny lol.
     
    and they had Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here 😂
    we thought it might have meaning but nope she was a world class troll.
     
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    InvidiaRed reacted to InBrightestDay in Winter Holiday 2023   
    That’s probably what’s going to happen with my story too.  I’ve made some progress, but in addition to having a long way to go, the story takes place on Christmas Eve anyway, so it’ll either go up then or on Christmas Day.
    Super happy to see you joining in!  These holiday anthologies are always better the more people are in on them, so the more the merrier. 🙂
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from InBrightestDay in InvidiaRed's review responses   
    From InBrightestDay on November 26, 2023
    Ok, one more chapter before my flight.
    Winter Blessing
    "Bask in the glory that is me." “I fuck a god on a daily basis.” xD
    YES!  THE GOAT HAS RETURNED!
    The dynamic between Glykon and the others is still great, and while I'm sure I said this last time I reviewed this story, I love that Logan reacts the way he does to the sight of an elder god dressed like a stripper choking out a snake god wearing a hand puppet.  As they say in Pitch Meetings, laughing "What is going on?" Indeed, by far its one of the most hilarious moments without a doubt.
    We drop the Yua plot thread here, so I'll disregard that going forward.
    It was cool to see the little action scene with the werewolf bikers.  I get that Duncan has mad skills, but it would be cool to see Logan get in on some of these, especially since he's a marine, so he does have firearms training. He absolutely does have modern training from isometric to asymmetric urban warfare, drone utilization and more.
    Being imprisoned has given him time for genuine introspection if nothing else.  All Glykon and him need is a few moments where their every move isn’t being watched.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to Desiderius Price in New Review Emails   
    I’ll redirect your attention to the fact you got a review! 
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from InBrightestDay in InvidiaRed's review responses   
    From InBrightestDay on November 14, 2023
    Ok, missed a few days, but this will probably be the chapter after which I pause to work on my holiday story.  Anyway, this is listed as Chapter 4, but I think it was actually the third holiday story, so I'm doing it now.
    Tricked
    I'd kind of forgotten what your version of Lucifer is like.  There's archvillain Lucifer, roguish charismatic Lucifer...and then there's, like, used car salesman Lucifer.  This one isn't quite used car salesman Lucifer...but considering the bit where he eats his son and doesn't notice until Mic points it out, he's not far off. Car Salesman playing checkers in a world of 3rd chess.
    One thing I didn't notice the first time around, or maybe it was added later, was the focus on the HD cameras at the casino.  I'd assumed in Death Always Wins that either the gods would have accounted for that or that, similar to vampires, they wouldn't show up on camera.  Maybe you can only record magic at 1080p. The conflux of halloween made it inevitable that eventually it would be too big to cover up, this was buried but this was a PR nightmare on steroids. Just imagine it leaking to social media or youtube.
    This story does begin introducing lore about the world (regarding suggestions of untamed regions of the underworld and such), though none of it pays off yet.  There is also a hint of a bigger story arc, which I'm going to keep an eye on to see if it comes back.
    Also I'd forgotten this but Logan is a kinky dude!  It was pretty funny when he got all enthusiastic and mentioned see-through pants he was going to have Duncan wear.  Yes, the ancient god will cross the United States in dignified fashion… If it makes his hubby happy that all that matters at least as far as it concerns Duncan, Clothing can be considered optional for the divine. Good luck trying to impose societal standards on literal gods at most you’ll be mocked with derision best case. Worst case smitten for the sheer hubris. The ones who bother with humanity regularly understand it.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from InBrightestDay in InvidiaRed's review responses   
    From InBrightestDay on November 11, 2023
    Well, I should probably be working on my holiday story right now, but why do that when I can procrastinate?  Hey, look, you assembled all the Duncan stuff; let me review some of that!
    Powdered Sugar
    So, this is mostly the same story that found its way into one of the holiday anthologies, but I do think you've changed it somewhat.  Aside from a more prolonged confrontation with Odin (where I think Logan might have tried to shoot him, though I may have mixed up who did what there), there is now a brush with death...well, you know what I mean.  Technically I think he's more like Death's assistant, but Mesopotamian mythology is a blind spot for me, so I'm not sure.
    During the conversation with Namtar, there's mention of something that happened at a casino, so perhaps this is a reference to Death Always Wins.  There is a mention that something messed up some work Duncan was doing, which feels like a plot thread.  I'm going to try not to guess what the plot threads are right now, because there is a lot of this story ahead.  I'll see how it plays out as we go! Spoilers ;D  Indeed, what was Duncan doing? Hahaha!
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from InBrightestDay in InvidiaRed's review responses   
    From InBrightestDay on November 11, 2023
    Temporary
    "You'd think evolution would tame that panic button. Alas," Duncan lamented.
    weeeell if evolution had removed the fear response, we'd probably be extinct by now, so Duncan can find it annoying, but it's probably here to stay. When you’ve at it from before the ice age started, he’s outlasted all others while also being the first gods to come to earth. The primal first fires that kept the monsters at bay. The grand oversized beasts that hunted cavemen and mammoth’s he outlived them all. The cousins of what would one day be man swallowed by history. And he’s still here
    This story highlights something that's present in the others, I think, but that I didn't really pay much attention to, and that's Duncan's... I don't know exactly what to call it.  His callousness, maybe his cynicism?  The latter is probably the most correct.  Either because of how long he's been doing this job or because of specific experiences, he seems to have negative thoughts about most things.  I'm writing this on my phone, so I can't go back and snag another quote easily, but his reaction to the beginnings of the Black Death in particular struck me, irritation about human contributions to the explosion of the rat population, and then washing his hands of the whole thing (granted, as a psychopomp he may have a very blasé attitude regarding death, which could make him look indifferent to human suffering). Indeed while dark gods did contribute to the horror and chaos it was mongols and other armies lobbing corpses into cities as city killing weapons that really soured his attitude. Bad on its own but willfully making more work does not make a happy death god.
    The only positive feelings he does seem to have are when he interacts with Logan, which indicates the importance of his husband to him.
     I think this may also be the first part of this series where we got the idea that Duncan has been several death gods throughout history, which obviously will become very important later.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to InBrightestDay in Winter Holiday 2023   
    I’ll try and start writing soon!  I want this to be on time. 🙂
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from InBrightestDay in Winter Holiday 2023   
    Posting it early to give everyone as much time as possible ❤️
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    InvidiaRed reacted to GeorgeGlass in Halloween 2023 Reviews   
    Wow, @InBrightestDay, you really captured the essence of the story.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to InBrightestDay in Halloween 2023 Reviews   
    It is unfortunately way too late at night for me to post another review or respond to Invidia, but I will get to it tomorrow.
    In the meantime, please enjoy this dramatic reenactment of @GeorgeGlass’s story.
     
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    InvidiaRed reacted to GeorgeGlass in Halloween 2023 Reviews   
    From InvidiaRed on October 21, 2023
    Glad you enjoyed!
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Deadman in Is a human having sex with a demon considered bestiality?   
    If the creature is sapient no. If there is a clear discrepancy of thought between them yes.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to BronxWench in Is a human having sex with a demon considered bestiality?   
    I agree with @InvidiaRed on this one. If it’s a demon with the ability to think in human terms, then it’s not bestiality. If it’s an animal with the thought processes of an animal, it’s bestiality.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from GeorgeGlass in Halloween 2023   
    That was quite the treat! Or was it trick? Might try sex in mine after all.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to GeorgeGlass in Halloween 2023   
    My story is posted!
    The Ultimate
    Summary: The Eve is a special night. And for Merri and Kyma, it will be unforgettable.
    Tags: 3Plus, Anal, Anthro, DP, MF, Oral
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