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  1. Hi, I'm new to the adultfanfiction forums and I have a story request. I've been coming to AFF for a while now, and feel like this site has the best authors out of any other site I've been to. Hopefully, one of you excellent writers will do my story for me. I know its a lot to ask, and I know how time consuming writing a story for someone else could be, but I really would like to read a story that's exactly what fantasize about . First I'm going to describe the characters and then the plotline. The characters are obviously myself, and my math teacher. I apologize if the descriptions , and the plotline is too exact, but I have this fantasy in my head, and whenever I try to get it down, it's never the same. I usually never write stories for myself because I can't seem to do it. I did change the names, but everything else is basically the same. Nina Koster- She is an outwardly passive person. When she is at school, some misconstrue her focus on learning as her being stuck up. She is borderline obsessive when it comes to her grades. Anything lower than an A is considered failing to her. Is usually the teachers pet, because she does so well. But outside of class, she is really laid back, sarcastic, and flirtatious. 19 years old. She is black, her skin color is lighter and more golden than caramel. She has long, layered brown hair (usually wears parted down the middle and curled), almond shaped light brown eyes, long lashes, straight nose, full rose colored lips, and big dimples. (gets the most compliments about her smile). 5'4", 127lbs, 32C. Has a small waist and a nice sized ass. Dresses causally (mostly form-fitting shirts and skinny jeans) doesn't wear a lot of makeup, just black-eyeliner and tinted lip-gloss. Mr. Smith (Mark)- Nina's calculus professor. He is a very humorous and witty person, but serious about teaching. One of those people you can just tell is very smart. Has a quiet domineering quality to him, like he is someone you would not want to get upset. But if he does start to get angry, he takes a small step back, and rubs his hand over and down his mouth and chin. When he asks questions he leans against something and folds his arm. He also has this sort of smirk that comes on whenever he is sarcastic. Calls everyone by first name. In his late thirties. About 5'11" with salt and pepper hair(mostly black). Usually wears long sleeved v-neck, but you can tell he has lithe muscles, has dark gray-green eyes that almost look black sometimes, strong jaw line, thick but not overpowering eyebrows, very nice smile (laughs a lot), he's white (but not pale), wears a gold band on his left ring finger… he's just really handsome. Plot- I want the story to have a few different sexual encounters to happen. I want it to start off with fleeting touches that couldn't possibly be what Nina thinks they are, but I want it to escalate to mark raping her in his office. At the start of that scene he makes her feel like she has to, and for that works a little, but then she starts to fight back. I don't want Nina to enjoy any of it, she is a virgin. I want him to be really rough, but then sort sweet (soft kisses, caring words). You can pick the circumstances under which all of this takes place. Overall, I not really a fan of the physical aspects of humiliation ( spitting, peeing on someone, etc.) , but Mr. Smith is a very calculating person. He should do and say things in a way that will keep her too ashamed to tell, but not so over the top to where she feels like he is the one solely responsible for what's happening. Almost like it's not that he can't control himself, it's just that he can't control himself in regards to her. (If that makes sense at all) Here are a couple things that I would like to see in the story: 1) Mr. Smith holding her, her back pressed against his front, with one hand around her neck and the other fingering her. He is not necessarily chocking her, but is applying enough pressure to keep her in check. His lips pressed to her ear whispering things, harsh yet soft, as she whimpers against him. 2) After he first starts with the light touching, I would like him almost to taunt her in class the next day. (Calling on her even when her hand is not raised, and then making her feel stupid for not paying attention, accidentally brushing against her as he passes out papers, things he can get away with) I can't describe how much it would mean to me for someone to actually take the time to write me this story. Hey, I'm grateful if you even read through all of that! Thanks
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