MiladyDraigen

this one I got last night. it was for the last rewritten chapter of my story Black Sheep: "Ah, they're kissing, they're kissing!" It made me feel all giddy. The review felt all happy and it made me wonder what the reviewer would do after the first sex scene

i am a serie reviewer, but I only review after a new update. the first review to a story is usually one that comments on the whole story until then and after that I review every chapter that follows, usually commenting on the new chap. I also have a friend of mine who is a pretty great writer and she is my serie reviewer for one of my stories. I love reading her reviews every time because she also helps me to improve my writing. Apart from her I don't have people who review much. Though I hope I will get more in the future.

my first flame was on Fictionpress, and the writer didn't even bother to log on.... I don't have the actual thing anymore.... but it said something about not liking the gay content (duh! there are warnings all over my summary and also at the start of the first chap....), also it was full of spelling errors... I laughed about it and went on

hi there, I'm a dutch writer who likes to write stories in English. I'm not that bad but I do need a beta for the errors that I accidentally do leave behind. I would like someone who has the time to be my beta, the chapters might not follow up fast but I would like to be able to get the chapters back within 3 days if possible. The chaps won't be long. The 3 stories I need beta's for, Black Sheep, a gay love story, it has a lot of angst elements including abusive relationship, suicidal tendencies and overall depression. chapter length; minimum of 1000 words, usually between 1200 and 1700 words. Fall Down, a gay love story, some elements of angst, including suicidal tendencies and mental illness. chapter length; minimum of 1000 words. only 2 chaps written until now, but chapter will be max 2000 words. This Is Who I Am! , gay romance, 50/50 sex scenes and regular story, it does fit together like that. A bit giddy and cute story, not planning on any angst, this is supposed to be a happy story. chapter length; no minimum, but chapters will be as long as my attentionspan... which is usually between 500 and 1500 words long. all stories are on my profile here so I'm looking for someone who: - has great understanding of (British)English and who can correct my stories accordingly. - has time to correct chaps within 3 days, they aren't that long so it should be possible - can give me hints to improve my writing style over all - likes the themes of my story - wants to beta 1 (or 2 or 3) of the story's It doesn't necessarily need to be one person for all 3 of the stories, I'm also okay if you want to just beta one of them. Thank you for your time and please contact me through pm if you would like to be my beta. Greetings, Draigen.