Lynna

I need a beta for a DEHR fanfic. The story is almost completed (oneshot) and I'd like to have someone checking it for spelling and general usage of the English language. I'm a non-native speaker though I do my best to write proper english. It would be nice if you're familiar with the storyline from Human Revolution but it's not a must. I've kept the fic rather simple, focusing more on erotic interactions than engaging into a web of confusing conspiracies. So if you're looking for a cleverly planned story that's going to keep you on the edge of your seat, including many twists and turns, you won't find it in my fics, sorry. Its a PWP with explicit graphic sex (gay content only). I'm not into odd kinks so the man-on-man action is everything that's happening. I've thrown some minor voyeur/exhib elements into the mix but no other things. The pairing is Jensen/Pritchard, and the 'relationship' happens after Adam's augmentation surgeries, NOT before. Dunno if there's a category/warning about human/cyborg sex but... there you go. XD A preview of an early, unedited bit can be found here: http://lynna-b.livej....com/60110.html To make a long story short: 33/34 pages (approx. 17.000 words) --> I'm still adding to the story after finding some logic errors adult ++ warnings: gay erotic, explicit graphic content, human/cyborg relationship, exhibitionism/voyeurism, toys, CASIE-mod + Infolink abuse/misuse

Hiya, I'm writing slash or f/m/m about Half-Life (there's no need to be familiar with the storyline though). I like critics about the plot and story in general and maybe I'm in need for the one or other help with my sentence structure (people talking with each other is my weak spot). I'm not offended with suggestions to the storyline or anything else you might change. In fact, I really like it. Aside from that, I'm not a native speaker, so I'm translating my stuff. My English improved a lot since I began writing. I started off with het/OCs, but I'm not doing that anymore. I'm not into squicky things (no bestiality, toilet sex or hardcore BDSM, no drastic non-con (could be happening as a bit of dominance/submission roleplay maybe - but nothing harsh or cruel) and I'm never writing about rape, underaged or incest) and I'm mostly concentrating on the smut to develop instead of fleshing out difficult story lines. So, I'm a "lemon-only" writer. XD Romance and tenderness is always included. I don't like mindless sex or stuff without any emotions envolved. So prepare yourself for gentle but explicit gay action. I would be really happy to get a mail from you if you're intested: muggle129@gmx.net cheers Lynna

Hi there, I'm writing slash or bisexual fanfics about the computergame Half-Life (mostly HL2). There's no need to be familiar with the games storyline. I'm mostly concentrating on the smut instead of fleshing out "difficult" stories. XD I've done het/OCs at first, but I'm not writing f/m anymore. I'm into m/m or f/m/m. No femmeslash! No bestiality! BUT non-con could be happening - nothing extreme, more the like of "no, no, no! when it's meant to be yess! Yeeess!". Very mild bondage or hints of dominance/Roleplay. .......... English isn't my first language, but my grammar and spelling has improved a lot since I made my first translations to English. I would like a Beta from the US if possible, 'cause I'm writing US-English (not GB or AUS). And your English should be better than mine of course. You should have a bit of spare time, so that I'm not forced to wait several month for 30 pages being beta'd. I'm writing explicit content, but romance is included. Suggestions and changes to the story itself (by the beta) are encouraged. I like critics to improve my English and the style of my writing in general. Please, have a look at my username to view the fic's I've done so far. Cheers Lynna