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    Mum got her first covid vaccine shot today. I mean, things aren’t exactly troublesome down here, but it’s still definitely nice to have.
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    Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on April 16, 2021 Thank you! It wasn’t easy finding a way to do something with real-world Angelica that would compare with what happened with Lady Angel, so I’m glad you liked the result. I see real-world Angelica as being even more passionate than her Wishful counterpart. No spoilers! I hope you’ll like it.
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    Re: “Wishful” From IttyBittySkitty on April 15, 2021 Skitty Chapter 8 I guess I do tend to reuse certain themes. Glad to have done that again. I think Angel/Angelica is the character he put the most thought into, so I really tried hard to do justice to her. Thank you! I do love the non-sex parts of this story, too.
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    I see other authors doing this, and decided to jump on this wagon Responding to reviews for The Vengeance of Hämsterviel – http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096485
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    Responding to reviews for my Wild Cherry stories: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095203 As of April 2021, I decided to lump all episodes of Wild Cherry into a single “story” and removed all other individual chapters. Due to this, I’ll be replying to comments to stories that I have deleted.
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    Sparrow

    Bunkerkampf (Mortuus Orbis Part Two)

    Authors: Sparrow and InBrightestDay Title: Bunkerkampf (Mortuus Orbis Part Two) Summary: Following the events of Part One, the remaining survivors attempt to rebuild their numbers, only to face new threats in the dead city. More pressing, however, is a threat already among them, that their fragile unity may not survive. Feedback: Reviews and constructive criticism much desired. Fandom: Misc Video Games/RPGs > Crossovers Warnings: Abuse Angst Bigotry BMod BP Contro HC Hum MCD MF MiCD Minor2 Oral Racist Rape Solo Tort UST Violence Solo or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091480 Review Reply thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/69143-mortuus-orbis-discussion-thread/
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    InvidiaRed

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    adizhsignin si a taebdaed rehtaf
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    InvidiaRed

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109700&chapter=3
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    writer question. I heard an editor complain that people overuse “ “ i’m a bit confizzled how else are you supposed to inform the reader that talking/conversation is taking place?
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    InvidiaRed

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    While Glykon knows much more than he lets on and a bit of a Klepto. No one is asking the right questions. Nope, He’s there for genuine altruistic reasons. Duncan is his actual grandpappy. And you can guess who his pappy is.
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    InvidiaRed

    InvidiaRed's review responses

    From JayDee on April 06, 2021 I definitely had a little trouble with threading some of the bits together on this one, but I assume the surrealist side is kind of the point with the various gods/entities and past/future elements mixed in through dream and ending? Glykon did say that Logan would share a dream. -The ancient/powerful god with the snake, I was worried for a moment there it was gonna turn into a Harry Potter crossover :p I guess that Logan couldn’t intervene because it was more of a vision of the past rather than actual time travel? Duncan repeats the worst moments of his entire existence when he sleeps. The incarnations may be interred in history but they are still him and he is still them. A reference to a moment of awesome to essentially tell Marduk himself momento mori just after his crowning moment of glory. It seemed to be covering some of the issues for why they had their falling out with the angels of that world? Or possibly I misunderstood that! Kinda wondered if those feathers later on in the present/future were tied to that somehow. Foreshadowing and also who did he see after that? *nudge* @InBrightestDay will be happy when they eventually catch up. I definitely couldn’t tell for sure if Logan was in the future as he woke up, or, since neither Hel nor Glykon had spotted anything if it was only a timeskip once he hit the mailbox and found it stuffed full of crap. An entire year worth of ads and other spam and mail. Duncan enchanted his mailbox so it could hold much more than it should. That said The Year That Never Was- Is essentially that, reality is unstable from the damage and when someone tried to force their will on it snapped almost everyone a year into the future. Mass confusion and chaos even without the pandemic. Glykon’s whole bit was great – loved the line about a god and a doorknob – but still just loving the heck out of that character in general! Glykon is a treat to write I find it adorable that he’s definitively has this grandson/ granddad dynamic with Logan despite being way older than Logan. Not a child but not a teenager just yet. One last thing – on the forum you said Southern Wind but the title here is Southwestern Wind – I see that a ‘southern wind’ picked up in the story so was that just a typo/old title used on the actual chapter or is it a shifting wind? =p Part two will be Hel’s POV
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    Desiderius Price

    The Unreviewed

    Ditto, I’m more of a writer anymore...assuming games/work don’t draw me away. Some genres get more reviews than others, kinda the way it happens, with some kinks less likely than others. I mean, I get it, not everybody’s into squishy tentacles invading between the underage fleshy buttocks, but some people are. All you can really do is to ask (politely), and hope for the best – maybe somebody will read/review, make your week! Good luck.
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    Because I have a lot of original stories, and because these stories don't tend to get as many reviews per story as my fanfics, I have decided to totally rip off BronxWench's idea and respond to all reviews of my original stories in a single thread. This should make things easier, both for me and for any of you lovely folks who have reviewed one of my original stories and would like to find and read my response to your review.