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guild seal could be an amulet of sorts, looks like weight scales, one with a box and the other with a coin, hanging around the neck of a troll head mount saying the guy was a troll

Happy New Year, SWP1! Well, as it turns out, I have one more thing to add to my list of items I’m expecting to post in January-February: The first chapter of my Candace-centric Phineas and Ferb story, “Third Dimension.” So here’s the full list of everything I hope to post by the end of February: "Stallion" chapters 4 and 5, plus the epilogue "Smooshed" chapters 1 and 2 "Third Dimension" chapter 1 The Power Arcane, Story 8: Eldridge "Can't Resist Her" (original mother-daughter one-shot) The (still untitlted) one-shot sequel to "Little Rose" The Helluva Boss fic "Heaven Help You" Original fic “Loli Gras” I know this seems crazy ambitious, but all of these have been in the works for quite some time, so they’re pretty far along. Chapter 1 of “Smooshed” is in beta right now, I expect to post “Can’t Resist Her” tomorrow, and I’ll probably post chapter 4 of “Stallion” early next week.

The idea for the story came from a line of dialogue in JayDee’s hilarious story You (http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107772&chapter=1) where a character complain about somebody treating her as an exposition fairy. JayDee’s story is a parody about AFF writing itself and IMHO well worth the time to read. Anyway, it made me start thinking about how fun it would be if having a fairy talking about sex toys instead. I am glad you found it funny, that was my intention. It is very much coming from a video game context. Invidia Red does in his review refer to Navi from the Zelda series. If you go looking for cosplay of Navi (and you don’t get stuck with Avatar examples) the likelihood is great the Navi cosplay will feature a text sign with some quote from the game. Tv tropes have a list of examples of exposition fairies in a number of computer games in case you want to educate yourself. https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ExpositionFairy Thank for the tip, I will look into the difference in the meaning for "lending" with "borrowing". It is easy to stumble into false friends when you write in a second language. BTW I am really glad you found just a few language issues. The work load of writing the story without a beta reader and the family suffering from sickness for a large part of the December was pretty much over the top. I am kind of surprised that I actually got it finished. *smiles* Maybe I should return to develop the setting more. An actual visit to the fairy court sounds like it could be fun to write.

Gotcha, thanks for the quick reply!

You don’t seem to subscribe to less is more...anyway...if you ever get around to collect your string of stories into a full story arc I would not mind try reading it since the setting is cool. Until then I think I will focus on my own writing and exchanging reads with other authors.

Now that’s my kind of bloodthirsty, and yes, THAT would be a warning!

But actually made from the foreskin of the previous bloke who crossed her?