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From Thundercloud on June 18, 2019 Yeah, I knew this chapter wouldn't please everyone. That would have been a fun way to go. That's fair. Part of why I added the material about the details that Mia wished she could remember was to give readers who are into the rapey stuff a few more tidbits so they wouldn't feel entirely cheated (as well as to give Mia a reason to feel guilty). But I also didn't want to freak out other readers by getting crazy explicit. In any case, the next (and final) chapter will come back to Mia's usual brand of naughtiness -- with a bit of a twist. Thanks for the review!

I wasn’t saying “well that really turned me off,” just that I didn’t find it super hot. As I mentioned in the review, it didn’t cause me to stop reading the chapter (there was plenty of other hot stuff in the scene). The only part of the story thus far that made me wonder whether I should continue reading was some concern over consent, which was cleared up several chapters ago. So no, further uses of “daddy” might not be a turn-on for me, but they’re not going to prevent me from enjoying the story. I really hope I haven’t upset you two with my reviews. I wasn’t trying for that; all I was doing was giving my completely subjective responses to each chapter. I didn’t mean to hurt anyone’s feelings. I want to point out again that this story is five chapters long so far, and the only chapter that alarmed me was Chapter 2, and that was due to me misunderstanding what was happening. Please don’t take any of my reactions as an indictment of your work. I’ve read stories that legitimately hurt me (emotionally, I mean), but I’ve never said that the authors shouldn’t have written them. I am a big believer in the idea that an author or authors should tell the story they want to. I also very much understand writing something for yourself but hoping someone else might enjoy it as well. So again, please don’t take this as me saying you two have done anything wrong, and know that I am genuinely enjoying the story.

...it really worked for me... Come on, my girl, he thought, come for daddy. ...and sometimes it didn't. Still, even when it wasn't working for me it never stopped me from reading, and like I said, this was still a really hot chapter. Actually, just what the hell is pre-cum, and what the hell is its purpose? He hadn't really thought about it before. *Also Sprach Zarathustra begins playing* There comes a time in everyone's life, a time when the stars align and the heavens open, a time when their knowledge is finally called upon. At long last, my Biology degree has paid off, because I KNOW THE ANSWER TO THIS QUESTION! So, for the curious, sperm cells are very sensitive to acidity. This is sort of a problem, since semen has to pass through the urethra...which is also where urine, containing uric acid, is expelled from the body. Therefore, in order to protect the sperm cells, two small organs called the Cowper's glands produce a clear fluid (pre-ejaculate or pre-cum) that is flushed through the urethra before ejaculation in order to neutralize any lingering acidity. I realize that was the least sexy description of anything sex-related ever, and you have my apologies for that. Thanks again for your review! Right off the bat, I’d like to point out that if the daddy part bothered you then we wonder how worthwhile it would be for you to keep reading, since there’s going to be plenty more of that to come over the following chapters, many of which we’ve already written, and right to the very end, which we haven’t written yet. We just thought we’d warn you to give you a more informed decision, and to cut off any ‘well that really turned me off!’ complaints, because… well, you were warned. Anyway, it’s entirely up to you, of course! Also, I just thought I’d give you a bit of an insight into the reasons behind us writing this story. We wanted to write something that really appealed to the both of us, something that we would really enjoy writing and exploring, and that’s very much what we came up with. We love the story and we each love both of the characters – so much so that it’ll be a bit of a wrench when we have to leave them behind. We decided to upload it as well since maybe others might also enjoy reading it, but it’s first and foremost for us two. But we’re both firm believers in writing to appeal to ourselves first anyway, which we feel every writer should do!

That’s the thing about the internet: you can never really tell whether you’re being trolled or whether this is just some really weird fanfiction. If nothing else, the title’s kinda funny. Well, I’m never going to like snuff, but it was mercifully short, so it didn’t hurt as much as a longer torture/snuff scene would have. I was like a living pinball, bounced from this story to WoH, where I stuck for about a decade before being launched back out...okay, the pinball analogy doesn’t really work, but even so it is kind of strange how things work out sometimes. Fic works in mysterious ways...

I keep thinking that I just have one more thing to do and chapter 9 of Country Summer will be finished, but then there always ends up being one more thing after that, and one more after that... SWP1: --Yes, there’s one chapter of Auntie’s Home still to come. I worked on it a bit tonight, actually, but there’s quite a bit more to do. --Chapter 5 of TMTM will have a lot of sex in it, including a grand finale involving all of the characters. I’m about to go away for a bit, too, to a place that has limited cell service and probably no wifi, so it may be a while before I post again.

Reds Under The Flower Bed is one of my oldest stories writing as JayDee – it was one of the first I loaded to AFF, back before I took my stories down and and then re-loaded a bunch on the same day in 2007. Near the start it says “Additional Credit: The idea for this came from an internet discussion with reikorikku and Deathstalker.” I no longer have any recollection of the discussion, and it even has the old story codes for using other than on AFF at the start. Ayy. It's short and unpleasant, like hungover toad. ...and now I remember the discussion a little. I’m 99% it included “Hey, I wonder what lines I could put in that would really get Godawful Fanfiction users spitting feathers?” Thanks for your review! I just had a quick scroll down it and I couldn’t face reading the fucking thing again, so good for you on managing it. ...hearing Toad say that would be just about the funniest thing ever written. In isolation, it's hilarious, complete with a mental image of Toad with a hammer and sickle flag appearing behind him and the Soviet national anthem blasting in the background. In context, though... As usual, you have a serious talent for giving the reader just the right sensory details to perfectly communicate pain, and there is actually something deeply unsettling about brutal murder taking place while happy music plays and the torturer features a happy, childlike smile. It was likely intended to be funny, and sometimes it can work for dark comedy, but there's also something kind of Orwellian about it. I think it was intended to be a trollfic originally, when it went on the grey archive. Then I think I posted it here because, fuck it, some folks like it. I have no such excuse for my later Piranha Plant snuff flashfic, Phytoerotic Asphyxiation. I mean, an actual communist revolution would be pretty bloody in Mushroom Kingdom – no wonder they took Koopa and co out as well! I haven’t played any lately. Most recent one I owned was Mario 64, which was a heck of a lot of fun but, what 20 years ago? The old NES ones were great fun in the late 80s/early 90s for little kids. Hard though. Yeah, absolutely have a lot less character establishment with fanfic, because you figure the fans know ‘em! But also with it being one of my earliest snuff fics I guess I just didn’t have a lot to work into it. Hell, I’d wonder why someone who did like snuff bothered. I couldn’t do more’n skim it. I bet about now you’re wishing you had continued not remembering it? I guess it all worked out in the end, as if you hadn’t gone for it we wouldn’t be getting The Woman In The Statue! The angel did come out of it not entirely broken thanks to you Thank you again for this unexpected review! I appreciate it.

Keep yer fingers crossed that we get staffing issues finally settled for where I work. It has been BRUTAL. Sixty hours worked since Saturday. And I’m not done.