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Holiday cold whapping me about the head… earlier than some years. Can I rent new sinuses?

From The Evil Fairy on December 26, 2018 Thank you! I wanted somebody who could do the Alfred Hitchcock "Good eeeevening" thing, and there Lucy was. I really wanted to do a "the twins get creepy" thing, and having them gang up on a sibling seemed like a good way to do that. I had plans for pretty much all of the other characters except Luan at that point, so she became their victim-turned-master. Then I became enamored of the idea of showing a bit of what lies beneath Luan's constant joking. I don't always get a chance to go for maximum sensuality in a scene, but I really tried for it there. So glad you liked it. It's pretty twisted, but I loved writing it. "In character" is always high praise to me. When it comes to fanfic, I live for authenticity. Thanks! I thought about making it 2 chapters, but Fairy Slayer (who betaed) and I agreed that it would work better as a oneshot, with nothing to break up the flow. Thank you!

Thanks for the warm welcome! For the purposes of future reviews, back on fanfiction.net I tended to leave one review per chapter (not duplicates, mind you, just leaving a review of each chapter as I went). Is that okay here, or would you prefer that for completed fics I just leave one review for the whole thing? I ask because some of the stuff I plan on reviewing is multiple chapters long. I ran into the same thing with my sibling romance story over on Literotica. The version you reviewed was actually an improved version, as a lot of the stuff about the siblings’ backstory was added while rewriting it. Even now, I’m still seeing things with that story I want to change.